I think it's nice that you didn't end Ryoda as a romance. It's more believable that way.
I have to say that I was pleasantly surprised when I read this. The 'Ai no Hana' fics I do read are written nicely and yours was one of them~ This is really nice. I really pictured everything so vividly in my head when I was reading this, which doesn't really happen a lot.. I wanted to punch Ryo, but I admire for him for always trying. Aww, Tacchan got stronger. That's good.
Write more Ryoda ne. It'd be nice. Thank you for writing this~!
Well, basically, this is what I was thinking everytime I'm listening to this song, or something like this... [crazy me~ XD]
I really hope that people will like that ending like that since my friends that read it before I'm posting it here was kinda hate it... They like "they aren't together in the end?" I'm so glad that you like it this way...
I'll gonna try to write more... [practically, if I'm having time... too much homeworks that waiting to be finished lately... T-T]
And thanks again for reading and commenting... It made me feel relieved....
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I have to say that I was pleasantly surprised when I read this. The 'Ai no Hana' fics I do read are written nicely and yours was one of them~ This is really nice. I really pictured everything so vividly in my head when I was reading this, which doesn't really happen a lot.. I wanted to punch Ryo, but I admire for him for always trying. Aww, Tacchan got stronger. That's good.
Write more Ryoda ne. It'd be nice. Thank you for writing this~!
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I'm extremely glad that you like it... *fuh*
Well, basically, this is what I was thinking everytime I'm listening to this song, or something like this... [crazy me~ XD]
I really hope that people will like that ending like that since my friends that read it before I'm posting it here was kinda hate it... They like "they aren't together in the end?"
I'm so glad that you like it this way...
I'll gonna try to write more... [practically, if I'm having time... too much homeworks that waiting to be finished lately... T-T]
And thanks again for reading and commenting... It made me feel relieved....
(^_^)
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When I'm listening to the song, I'm thinking of slow motion fluff scenes... it's a little weird.
Your friends actually hated it? I think it's a great ending. It ended so nicely this way.
Yeah, it'd be nice if you could write more Ryoda if you hae time. I know homework sucks and I haven't even started school yet.
Ah, no problem. Do your best ne~
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Ah, I still feel the same though ne~
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Me friend didn't really hate it, they just didn't like it...? [or so I think...?]
Now, I really hope that a day will be more than 24-hours...
(^_^)
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i hope they can hv a new start, even as a friend only though
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I think that was the best - start over as friends... It was better... ^^
Thanks again for reading and commenting... [it really make ma feel relived^^]
(^_^)
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