PoT Fic: Sitting On A Log (InuKai)

[prillalar]

Still sick. Thus, fic of the self-indulgent variety.

Sitting On A Log
InuKai, PG13, 1100 words.
Inui, Kaidoh, moon, and stars.

NB: I couldn't figure out if there was a particular Japanese idiom for earthshine so I just went with the one I knew.

Comments

[squidlet]

Cute story by one of my favourite InuKai writers! Life is good.

I read it yesterday night, and some parts (Inui) seemed off to me, but when I read it again today, it was fine again. I think it was how he seemed to be so tentative. Then I thought, what the heck, Kaidou's right. He can't be working /all/ the time.

Thanks for the fic!

[prillalar]

Thank you! Re Inui, I think I needed to develop the role-reversal a little more. It's deliberate on Inui's part, to tacitly encourage Kaidoh to be more at ease wtih him. But I didn't really make that obvious.

[chzbrgr_of_doom]

^__________^ this makes me very, very happy.

[prillalar]

Hurrah!

[hellise]

that was cute and sweet.. XD

[prillalar]

Thank you. :)

[svz_insanity]

*squees* Am so rec'ing your fic. It gave me a warm, fuzzy feeling. ^^ I love the InuKai interaction and it's just so cute and sweet.

[prillalar]

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)

[ee970]

Ahh, I love your writing so much. <3

[prillalar]

Aw, thank you. :)