Comments | price_o_love: Chapter 19 -- Ties That Bind

lozateazer in price_o_love

Chapter 19 -- Ties That Bind

Jan 03, 2008 01:45

Warning: This chapter contains BDSM rope play between consenting adults. Please avoid if this is not your thing.

( Keep bending me until I'm completely broken in )

naveen, josh

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moondreamer1 January 3 2008, 11:37:54 UTC

*applauds*

Very nicely done.

lozateazer January 3 2008, 21:16:11 UTC

Thank you *curtsies*

amalc January 3 2008, 12:32:02 UTC

For a chapter that came with a BDSM warning this was anything but. It was intensely sweet and intimate. People are very complicated aren't they?

Well done!

lozateazer January 3 2008, 21:05:47 UTC

I think that if Naveen found out that you were saying that something he had done was sweet, he wouldn't be too pleased. *wink*

But yeah, people are insanely complicated, and I'm really glad that you liked the chapter!

green_grrl January 3 2008, 17:10:25 UTC

Argh, emotions! I know Naveen keeps telling himself he can't be with just one person, but everything else about his behavior and emotions is belying that.

lozateazer January 3 2008, 21:15:39 UTC

Yeah, well, if you've told yourself over and over in your life that love just isn't for you... it's a bit hard to change your own mind. *sighs and pats him on the head*

Not like Josh is any more willing to be devoted to just one person, hell, even if he was, he's got... oh... what is it? Three? Four? people to choose from. The trollop!

haldoor January 4 2008, 03:16:10 UTC

Oi! Who you calling a trollop!?!

lozateazer January 4 2008, 09:51:55 UTC

I'm calling the house slut a trollop, that's what I'm doing!!

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Price of love argentine65 January 4 2008, 13:28:56 UTC

I want to thank you all who helped to make my last year a little better by writing this wonderful story. Happy 2008 to you all. Martha

Re: Price of love haldoor January 5 2008, 01:49:16 UTC

Thank you for your kind words, Martha! We are so pleased you're enjoying it and that it's helped make things better in your life! We hope you'll continue to enjoy through 2008 and that you have a good year too (with or without our help!) ;-)

zelda_zee January 6 2008, 22:24:21 UTC

Ooh, so hurty! Poor boys, and their messy, twisty emotions. I loved how emo this part was, it made the hotness all the better. The ending, with Naveen so desperate to distance himself, was the perfect touch.

haldoor January 7 2008, 07:36:52 UTC

Ooh, gorgeous icon - very appropriate for this thread!

Thank you, I'm glad the emo is working for you (as I should know it would!). They are both trying so hard not to be anything too special to each other but underneath, I'm sure they both know... Thanks again for reading and for your most welcome comment!

zelda_zee January 7 2008, 07:49:02 UTC

Hey, I have a question - did I hallucinate seeing a 2nd part to the Matt/Josh backstory? I thought I saw it posted at some point but now I can't find it.

lozateazer January 7 2008, 07:50:37 UTC

*whispers* Check back next Thursday

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