chandelier skies

Feb 12, 2011 11:13

summary: kyuhyun's never had the strongest heart.

char/pair: kyuhyun-centric, hinted kyuhyun/yesung

genre: friendship, angst (slight romance)

rating: pg

a/n: sorry for the lapslock. kpop_prompts 045: mask.

the hardest part of breathing is exhaling )

g: slash, g: angst, f: super junior, p: kyuhyun/yesung, g: tragedy, r: pg, !fic, g: friendship, l: oneshot, g: romance

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snoorella February 12 2011, 16:39:27 UTC
you started so beautifully with a simple point on breathing (which is, by the way, one of the most wonderful intros i have ever read. i loved it. i love it, so much). AND LIKE OMG throughout the piece i was thinking about how jongwoon = breathing to kyuhyun AND IT FEELS LIKE SUCH A REVELATION because when jongwoon's gone, kyuhyun can't stay alive and when he's there with him with happiness (not angstangstangstangstwhatislikeangstangst), kyuhyun finds it easier to just be around. and it's so wonderful. was that the intention or am i just over-reading into it?

in my opinion, jongwoon is used when you really want to show a more realistic side of him (like when you want to show him off stage, not on it) and yesung is seen more as a facade? and this piece is more real than it is about hiding behind a mask, so you used 'jongwoon'? IDK, that's how i used to write it when i wrote.

i almost cried at the ending, and like 'kyuhyun wonders if there's such thing as love.' REALLY. i almost bawled my eyes out. it was perfect and angsty, and i ( ... )

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snoorella February 12 2011, 16:41:08 UTC
wait, typo. (not angstangstangstangstwhatisliFeangstangst)

this is what happens when i am in a mind-boggling state BECAUSE OF FANFICTION. i'm losing it.

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kingdra February 13 2011, 15:22:01 UTC
OMG YOU TOTALLY LOOKED INTO MY FIC OMG because while i was writing this i was like, i have no idea what the fuck i'm doing and where i'm going and symbolism and you know what i'm just going to write this e__o OI. I'LL JUST GO WITH YOUR INTERPRETATION BECAUSE IT ACTUALLY MAKES SENSE. hehe n_n/

yeah lol. recently i've felt so uncomfortable writing yesung as... 'yesung', really. idek how the members refer to each other, by their stage or their real name >_>;

sldkj OH NO DON'T CRY /throws tissues at you sdkljflkj you don't know how much this comment means to me ;~; thank you so much!!!♥♥

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kingdra February 13 2011, 15:22:31 UTC
POOR KYU INDEED what is this bias you speak of
your words are enough♥ ty bb

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angelqmin February 13 2011, 04:31:32 UTC
OH.MY.GOD.THIS.IS.TOO.BEAUTIFUL.FOR.MY.EYES.IT'S.MAKING.ME.CRY.
WHY.ARE.YOU.MAKING.ME.CRY ;A;
I really loved the beginning where it talks about breathing 'cause it was so OMG I loved it 8D
Kyuhyun, you are such an ass for not caring!!! I would have been like Jongwoon too and ask you: like this is all a big joke to you. what the fuck is wrong with you, why don't you ever do anything, say anything why - D:
This is so deep and depressing but SO COOL I LOVE IT!!! /nolongerfanficdeprived :D
JONGWOON LEAVES SUJU + KYU ;A;

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kingdra February 13 2011, 15:23:26 UTC
LMAO SDFLKJJ BB /GIVES YOU LOTS OF TISSUES AND HERE HAVE A WARM SWEATER TOO
;a; thank you ♥ WHY YOU SO NICE♥♥

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angelqmin February 13 2011, 16:23:21 UTC
/TAKES TISSUES AND CRIES EVEN MORE ;A; TOO BEAUTIFUL XDD
IT'S CAUSE YOU'RE FANFIC IS SO NICE ♥♥♥♥♥♥

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kyudreamz39 February 13 2011, 06:47:37 UTC
oh my heart.

after i finished reading this, i just sat and stared at the screen and kinda digested it all.

why do you break my heart like this. isn't this your otp. WHAT ARE YOU DOING BREAKING IT. AND BREAKING SUJU ON TOP OF THAT.

and kyuhyun notices; he's always noticed. kyuhyun has never had the best heart. --> kyuuuuu i love you bb, don't get hurt. i'm gonna smother you in pink and unicorns and starcraft and hide you in my closet.

my second angst fic in two days ... what am i doing to myself seeing kyu get heartbroken every time. why can't he express himself. my poor bb. ;_______________________________; AND I STILL LIKED IT. *tears up some more*

(keke i saw the hanhae though ... i really like weird pairings for some reason :3)

YOU BETTER HOPE MY ROOM ISN'T FLOODED WITH TEARS SOON.

(but don't get me wrong i loved it ♥ )

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kingdra February 13 2011, 15:24:52 UTC
I DON'T KNOW. (for some reason i really have a thing for breaking up my otp... i have no idea why ;________;)
sflkj poor kyuhyun I FEEL LIKE I TORTURE HIM TOO MUCH LOL
DDDD: /gives you tissues and fluff and crack 8DDD ♥
heh /i totally do not have a hanhae bias /nowai
/THROWS YOU A CANOE
thank you so much bb ♥♥♥ :DDDD

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catherine_leite February 13 2011, 08:47:47 UTC
Beautiful lines. ;~;
why do i feel sad after reading this??

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kingdra February 13 2011, 15:25:21 UTC
D: I'm sorry! /cuddles♥
Thank you so much for the comment♥♥

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