chandelier skies

[kingdra]

summary: kyuhyun's never had the strongest heart.

char/pair: kyuhyun-centric, hinted kyuhyun/yesung

genre: friendship, angst (slight romance)

rating: pg

a/n: sorry for the lapslock. kpop_prompts 045: mask.

Comments

[snoorella]

you started so beautifully with a simple point on breathing (which is, by the way, one of the most wonderful intros i have ever read. i loved it. i love it, so much). AND LIKE OMG throughout the piece i was thinking about how jongwoon = breathing to kyuhyun AND IT FEELS LIKE SUCH A REVELATION because when jongwoon's gone, kyuhyun can't stay alive and when he's there with him with happiness (not angstangstangstangstwhatislikeangstangst), kyuhyun finds it easier to just be around. and it's so wonderful. was that the intention or am i just over-reading into it?

in my opinion, jongwoon is used when you really want to show a more realistic side of him (like when you want to show him off stage, not on it) and yesung is seen more as a facade? and this piece is more real than it is about hiding behind a mask, so you used 'jongwoon'? IDK, that's how i used to write it when i wrote.

i almost cried at the ending, and like 'kyuhyun wonders if there's such thing as love.' REALLY. i almost bawled my eyes out. it was perfect and angsty, and i love angst and it makes me think and omg, it was amazing. have i mentioned how much i love your fics? i'll make it a point to comment more.

[snoorella]

wait, typo. (not angstangstangstangstwhatisliFeangstangst)

this is what happens when i am in a mind-boggling state BECAUSE OF FANFICTION. i'm losing it.

[kingdra]

OMG YOU TOTALLY LOOKED INTO MY FIC OMG because while i was writing this i was like, i have no idea what the fuck i'm doing and where i'm going and symbolism and you know what i'm just going to write this e__o OI. I'LL JUST GO WITH YOUR INTERPRETATION BECAUSE IT ACTUALLY MAKES SENSE. hehe n_n/

yeah lol. recently i've felt so uncomfortable writing yesung as... 'yesung', really. idek how the members refer to each other, by their stage or their real name >_>;

sldkj OH NO DON'T CRY /throws tissues at you sdkljflkj you don't know how much this comment means to me ;~; thank you so much!!!♥♥