Comments | prettykitty_fic: hesitate, then move forward (girl!spencer/ryan)

prettykitty_fic

hesitate, then move forward (girl!spencer/ryan)

Aug 25, 2008 22:16

hesitate, then move forward
1800 words // PG // girl!Spencer/Ryan
[A/N: just trying to get back into the swing of writing, be gentle.]
[Prompt: inspired by the lyrics - i felt so bad when your mom caught us eating ice cream in your room at three in the morning / Cause i'd hate for her to not want me around her daughter cause my heart stops every ( Read more... )

fic band: p!atd, fic type: bandslash, fic pairing: spencer/ryan, fic prompt: lyric

Comments 26

liketheroad August 27 2008, 14:23:25 UTC

Oh my godddd this was so perfect. Sigh. ♥

prettykitty_fic August 28 2008, 18:13:37 UTC

:D :D :D hope it made your day a little brighter!

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prettykitty_fic August 28 2008, 18:15:16 UTC

awesome! i'm glad you said that, about how it felt real, that makes me feel a lot better about this piece :D

siren_mage August 27 2008, 18:29:21 UTC

I adore this! I love how perfectly developed Spencer is both as a girl and as the Spencer we all know and love. I can imagine our Spencer doing these exact same things and I think that's key to any good born-as-a-girl!fic - maintaining the core of their character ( ... )

prettykitty_fic August 28 2008, 18:23:27 UTC

man, oh man, this comment totally made my day! (it also makes me want to start leaving much better comments on other people's fic besides *omghandsflail* and such)

i'm really glad you liked the characterizations and the way they interact. tension! :D i have a firm belief that no matter how good of friends you are, there's always going to be a 'what if' scenario introduced (or maybe that's just my own inability to shut that idea out of my own head) and sometimes the outcome is a conscious decision and sometimes it's not...okay, not sure if that made sense, but i'm going to quit rambling, lol.

and i totally believe that spencer would knock the shit out of anyone who really messed with ryan *happy sigh* o.t.p.

slashxmistress August 27 2008, 18:37:53 UTC

\o/ My otp! I love them in any form!
You did a good job of translating Spencer into female form. keeping his Spencerness and still making a believable girl. Awesome.

prettykitty_fic August 28 2008, 18:16:55 UTC

me too!!

oh man, i always worry about characterization, so your comment makes me feel better.

cloudlessclimes August 29 2008, 00:39:03 UTC

Yay! You posted it! And it's still fantastic. Which is to say I would not mind beataing more of this type of stuff...*hint hint*