[exo] in my arms (would you stay forever?)

[pretend_parties]

|| jongin x yixing, implied pairings | pg | romance(?) ||
warning: #HowToGrammar // disclaimer: no copyright infringement intended whatsoever.
summary: we've reached a level where there's no turning back.
a/n: follow-up to this. please read that first, thank you :)

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Comments

[seven_rainbows]

Ahhhh! Gasping for air....! This is just so beautiful in its own simplistic-living-in-the-moment-inside-their-own-world kind of way. ;D KaiLay is loveee! One of my fav OTPs! Ohoho

[pretend_parties]

/uses an oxygen mask to regulate my breathing/

sobs ;;; thank you so very much for taking the time to leave such a comprehensive and detailed comment! :'D i just - omg thank you it means alot to me thank you ^^

I like how you phrase these simple sentences into something beautiful, It's more towards in making them flow fluidly.

oh wow i'm so flattered and happy and just thank you so much :)

ahahah yess i definitely agree with you in that not many authors out there write kaixing. they're such a lovely couple though. having that said, i guess being a rarepair is what makes them all the more beautiful.

thats how i think in any case o(^^)o

also yes i'm happy you like and enjoy my work! i always try my best in writing so it's always incredibly heartwarming to hear things like that & know that all the effort is not done in vain.

i'll be very glad if you can comment more in the future if it's not too much to ask.p.s. about xingxing creating cracks all over sehun's heart, well, who can refuse a very persuasive and determined jongin?

[seven_rainbows]

Haha, you're welcome, author-nim! ^^V

It's the least I could do for such a nice fic, and it's KaiLay, too! I'm glad that you found my comment was detailed enough. I felt that it was still kind of lacking, though. @_@ But I tried my best to describe what I wanted to say, and then I ended up rambling. OTL Haha. >_I actually like descriptive, paragraphed stories. They provide a lot of insights and are marvelous in their own way. It's just sometimes, it feels nice to read something that are more airy and more simplistic in nature, but still as beautiful and emotionally provoking as the former. It's like a breathe of fresh air

[pretend_parties]

omg a breath of fresh air? :) wow wow wow that's new thank you!!!

tbh, i used to be really envious of all those writers who can come up with chunks and chunks of beautiful and profound words. but then i realised that not every author has the same writing style, and my personal style - as said by a few people - is simplistic but at the same time powerful enough to conjure and express strong emotions. otl i feel like i'm bragging but well, i guess its kinda true? \o/

in a way, like what my teachers in high school said, my works are more narrative than descriptive. more free-flowing than compact :D

ahhh yes, it IS rather frustrating when there's so little kaixing fics out there. That i agree with you.

i like rambly comments! it's so fun to read and seriously, it sort of gives me an insight of what ppl think about my writing. i appreciate it and will never be bored of them ^^

i just enjoy reading ALL kinds of comments, be it a long one, a one-liner, or random key smashing heuheuheu :3

Thank you again ♥

[pretend_parties]

eheheh :3 you're not the first though? Beaten by some epic essay comment lol :D

but yesss you're right. Jongin has a rather strong character here, very driven, very determined, extremely focused on what he wants. Xingxing is more..gentle. Softer in a way.

What did you mean by 'unusual' characterisation though? :)

Thank you so much for reading & commenting! ♥

[yoonlove]

sigh...this verse...seriously...MAKES ME CRY! i adore sexing as much as fanxing (okay no maybe not - i could never love a yixing-ship more than fanxing but still i adore sexing!) and you do this to sehunnie... T.T seriously both jongin and yixing are such horrible best friends hmph.

i know i complain about you writing kaixing a lot but this verse...just this verse...canigetmore? >< ikindofwanttoseetheirsecretcomeoutintotheopenlol *hides under a blanket* it's so fluffy yet a bit bitter at the same time. i love how mature yixing is and how childish and clingy jongin is. their dynamics...i can't.

wow i'm sorry, my comment is just all over the place lol just ignore me. i can't articulate my thoughts to save my life.

[pretend_parties]

okay baby dont cry ~ hush now everything's okay lol xD

ikr?! like they're such sucky best friends but they're just so in love and everything is rainbows haha ^^;; i feel horrible for luhan and sehun though

omg this verse is gonna get bigger with back-stories and more follow-ups etc so stay tuned! Dont change the channel :)

i srsly dont care if you just key-smash at me. just comment more juseyo :D

Thank you for reading and commenting! ♥

[yelrihs_jefan]

Here's my promised intelligent comment! :D

[pretend_parties]

Hello hello :D

i'll be writing not only follow-ups, but back-stories as well ^^ so watch as this verse grow! omg i hafta name the verse since it's gonna contain more than 5 ficlets/one-shots

and i deliberately wrote layhan and sekai as best friends. i figured the impact will be bigger that way? :)

i wont say more in case of disclaimers..but thank you very much for reading and commenting! Really appreciate it ♥

oh and i dont write canon fics ^^

[melodixminor]

I can overlook them being cheating bastards just cause I ship them that much. Your writing is greatt, been so long since I read exo fic.