[exo] in my arms (would you stay forever?)
|| jongin x yixing, implied pairings | pg | romance(?) ||
warning: #HowToGrammar // disclaimer: no copyright infringement intended whatsoever.
summary: we've reached a level where there's no turning back.
a/n: follow-up to this. please read that first, thank you :)
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( please click teh title ;3 )
warning: #HowToGrammar // disclaimer: no copyright infringement intended whatsoever.
summary: we've reached a level where there's no turning back.
a/n: follow-up to this. please read that first, thank you :)
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( please click teh title ;3 )
And KaiLay has that serene, and peaceful, full of fluff, dusted with some angst aura. And I love how your portray them, so in love, yet they are chained by their other half who I'm sure they love but not as deeply as each other.
It's sad, and it's wrong in a way, but right at the same time. It can be said that it's selfish of them to keep prolonging something that will inevitably break in the future. The relationship between KaiLay with their lovers are more like a back-up, I say, in case they might not be able to be together in the future. *^*
It will be a heartbreak for Luhan and Sehun, I'm sure. But, I just can't help but wanting Kai and Lay to be together, too. Kai really loves Lay from the bottom of his heart, and he looks like he will do anything for Lay. It's nice to see him so passionate about his bunny. Hehe. And Lay, you cutie patootie! I can see that you are afraid that Sehun will break since he is a fragile little thing, but meh, you're making cracks all over if you keep doing this. Haha.
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sobs ;;; thank you so very much for taking the time to leave such a comprehensive and detailed comment! :'D i just - omg thank you it means alot to me thank you ^^
I like how you phrase these simple sentences into something beautiful, It's more towards in making them flow fluidly.
oh wow i'm so flattered and happy and just thank you so much :)
ahahah yess i definitely agree with you in that not many authors out there write kaixing. they're such a lovely couple though. having that said, i guess being a rarepair is what makes them all the more beautiful.
thats how i think in any case o(^^)o
also yes i'm happy you like and enjoy my work! i always try my best in writing so it's always incredibly heartwarming to hear things like that & know that all the effort is not done in vain.
i'll be very glad if you can comment more in the future if it's not too much to ask.
p.s. about xingxing creating cracks all over sehun's heart, well, who can refuse a very persuasive and determined jongin? lmao xD
Kaixing FTW!!!! ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
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It's the least I could do for such a nice fic, and it's KaiLay, too! I'm glad that you found my comment was detailed enough. I felt that it was still kind of lacking, though. @_@ But I tried my best to describe what I wanted to say, and then I ended up rambling. OTL Haha. >_<
I actually like descriptive, paragraphed stories. They provide a lot of insights and are marvelous in their own way. It's just sometimes, it feels nice to read something that are more airy and more simplistic in nature, but still as beautiful and emotionally provoking as the former. It's like a breathe of fresh air...! ^^
So, hohoho! Yes, I agree that KaiLay is even more precious since they are so rare. So rare that sometimes I can't help but cry. Lol. ;w; But, I agree with you on this one. Hehe. Rare OTPs are beautiful; they are like sparkling gems hidden beneath the dull sand and muds covering the surface. And trying to discover them, and then indulge in them slowly just make the experience the more memorable and precious. ;3
It's not called rare for nothing, though, and sometimes I just get frustrated with the rarity of these so called OTPs. *coughkailaycough* OTL But, lol, I still love them!
Yes, I really enjoyed your work, author-nim! I find this fic fluffy and yet it hints at something darker about human emotions and their relationships between one another. It is both healing and destructive at the same time. Haha. I do find that KaiLay is like YinYang in this and it is interesting to see. I really appreciate you hard works in making these fics, and I'm sure that other people agree your works are beautiful.
I'll be happy, too! Hehe! And lol, I'm rambling again! Ugghh, make me stoppp! @_@ I'm sorry if I bore you to death!
P.S.S: IKR!!! I can't blame our bunny XingXing who happily got eaten by the big bad wolf Innie! I mean, anybody would find it hard to resist the temptation that is Jongin. Lol. Just, poor Sehun and Luhan. ;-; Let me hug you, babies! I'll give you cookies and milk and nice pillows and blankets to sleep with! So, yeah, don't cry when the deeds come to light... Nyhehehehe.... ;9
KaiXing FTW! <3<3<3
Haha! Off to the lalala land, digging your stories and then eat them like the fine dark chocolate they are! Lol! XD
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tbh, i used to be really envious of all those writers who can come up with chunks and chunks of beautiful and profound words. but then i realised that not every author has the same writing style, and my personal style - as said by a few people - is simplistic but at the same time powerful enough to conjure and express strong emotions. otl i feel like i'm bragging but well, i guess its kinda true? \o/
in a way, like what my teachers in high school said, my works are more narrative than descriptive. more free-flowing than compact :D
ahhh yes, it IS rather frustrating when there's so little kaixing fics out there. That i agree with you.
i like rambly comments! it's so fun to read and seriously, it sort of gives me an insight of what ppl think about my writing. i appreciate it and will never be bored of them ^^
i just enjoy reading ALL kinds of comments, be it a long one, a one-liner, or random key smashing heuheuheu :3
Thank you again ♥
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