Lies, Sex, and Genes Part 27

[premerseahshiko]

Title: Lies... (27)
Characters: Akihito, Asami, (OC- Scales), Takato, Kou, Tao, Feilong, Wolfhound
Disclaimer: Except for Scales, no characters belong to me. :(

LIES, SEX AND GENES Part 27

Three days after the death of Liu Sr...

"Don't say it," Akihito warned 'A' as he recognized the look on his face while the teenagers in his 'care' snickered behind

Comments

Comment from your No. 1 Stalker!!!

[paranoia_woman]

Yep, I'm still here.
So Yoh was Takato's first love. I figured that out before the end so it wasn't as big of a surprise as it could of been. Really, you gave it away a little earlier in the chapter when he was reminiscing over his wolf that had slipped away. I do like the twist though. Gives everyone, (except Kou so far), a chance at romance.
I do wonder how much he changed physically since last Takato saw him.

Re: Comment from your No. 1 Stalker!!!

[premerseahshiko]

I hadn't really taken physical change into account, but I will try to include that in the future.

As for giving it away... yeah I did, but it was only one sentence and I figured if a reader was careless, they would miss it. Just a little test... you passed.

Thanks so much for your comment Stalker! ;)

[dela1]

Takato and yoh well cant say I saw that coming. But thank you so much for the new chap cant wait for the next

[premerseahshiko]

Actually I was thinking about making the two a pair when I started the fic. They never seem to have any luck hooking up with anyone, so I thought about them hooking up together.

Glad you liked it and thanks for the comment!

[miershyk]

homg~ i'm rereading the last few lines and my mind's going crazy!!! Yoh was Takato's ex? maybe not? Yoh similar yet different from Akihito? waaaaaaaaa? omg~~~~~~~~~~~~

anyway yay for another update... and totally am happy with how A and Akihito are going now... hehe~ Akihito and his dance... ROFL~~~~~~~~ right, now that they're all back and gathered in one place with Takato and Kou... i guess a lot of things are gonna be resolved now? woa~

can't wait for the next update!!!

[premerseahshiko]

Yes Yoh is Takato's ex. I figured he might be a sweetheart under that exterior of his and he only put it up after an incident. I will explain that during the next part.

Glad you liked it and thanks so much for the comment!

[miershyk]

omg~~~~~~~~~~~ then i'm DEFINITELY looking forward to reading your next update!!! XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD

[juli_cul]

Takato and Yoh? I didn't saw that coming!!!! Very enjoyable!!! Can't wait to see what coming next:-)

[premerseahshiko]

Yes. I love to shock. ;)

Glad you liked it and thanks so much for the comment!

[aida_yaoi05]

So sweet...keep your work kay. Hope next chapter will be good.:p

[premerseahshiko]

This series is rapidly drawling to a close. I figured about five more chapters are left.

[baby_fei]

Only five more??? *cries* Well, then, perhaps you will go back to writing 'What if' and crack us to death once more after a serious & sad fic?

[premerseahshiko]

I will try to return to 'what if'