Comments | premerseahshiko: Lies, Sex, and Genes Part 27

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Lies, Sex, and Genes Part 27

Jan 06, 2008 23:42

Title: Lies... (27)
Characters: Akihito, Asami, (OC- Scales), Takato, Kou, Tao, Feilong, Wolfhound
Disclaimer: Except for Scales, no characters belong to me. :(

LIES, SEX AND GENES Part 27

Three days after the death of Liu Sr...

"Don't say it," Akihito warned 'A' as he recognized the look on his face while the teenagers in his 'care' snickered behind ( Read more... )

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Comments 33

yeeeeey January 7 2008, 17:55:03 UTC

yeeeeey!!! I'm so happy to see Aki and A again...and that Fire and Tao are finally home!!! But where is Ice??

OMG!!!! I didn't imagine Yoh and Takato!!!! How did you get that idea??? wooow

Thanks for the update

premerseahshiko January 8 2008, 00:54:31 UTC

Where Ice is will probably explained in the next part. He's fine though.

Glad you liked it. Thanks so much for your comment!

goldfinch3 January 7 2008, 19:21:51 UTC

I read chapters 26 & 27 in one go. They were great, like always-but what a cliffie!! Now I'm impatient to know if Takato will get his own ex lover back. Asami's jealousy was just sweeeet. I love it when he acts like that. It was just what a I needed after a past couple of stressful days. Soooo, thanks!

premerseahshiko January 8 2008, 00:55:54 UTC

Yes. The evil cliffies... my works are famous for them. ;)

So glad you liked it and it relieved some of your stress! Thanks for the comment!

baby_fei January 8 2008, 02:40:15 UTC

Yaaay!! Finally Yoh has a man to call his own!! Competition OUT!! *not sure if that was me or Ice celebrating!!* I never expected Yoh x Takato but now that you mentioned it, they kinda fit together. Well done for this chapter as always. Your A x A is so cute!

premerseahshiko January 8 2008, 04:13:02 UTC

Yep. Somehow those two fit in my mind. ;)

Thanks for the comment!

rose_erato January 8 2008, 07:47:13 UTC

I recently discovered your fics and I just wanted to let you know that I'm enjoying them so much!

premerseahshiko January 9 2008, 03:08:09 UTC

It's always great to have new readers and I'm glad you enjoy my fics. ;)

4everinblujeans January 19 2008, 17:15:35 UTC

nice story ^^ Asami is jealous of Akihito's friend is something that we don't see everytime. Hope you'll continue soon.

premerseahshiko January 20 2008, 04:47:17 UTC

I'm glad you liked it. Stay tuned because the sidestory of Yoh and Takato will be up soon! ;)