Comments | pre_raphaelite1: FIC: "A Waltz to Surrender" (James/Sirius/Regulus, NC-17)

pre_raphaelite1

FIC: "A Waltz to Surrender" (James/Sirius/Regulus, NC-17)

Apr 08, 2007 11:55

I think out of all of my writing, this is one that I am most proud of. I really love the way it came together. So, please! Read. Let me know what you think!

Title: "A Waltz to Surrender"
Author: pre_raphaelite1
Pairing(s): James/Sirius/Regulus
Rating: NC-17
Summary: His clothing was strewn around the room, the expensive fabrics lying like rags on the scarred ( Read more... )

bdsm, james/regulus, james/sirius, sirius/regulus, my fics, james/sirius/regulus, fics

Comments 14

gestaltrose April 9 2007, 06:31:37 UTC

James as a Dom omg I love you!!! This just works on so many levels. The collar, the rings. Fuck I can't even get out how guh this made me.

pre_raphaelite1 April 10 2007, 23:57:42 UTC

*laughs and loves back* Thanks for reading! And I'm very flattered by your level of guh!

_emeraldgreen April 12 2007, 19:51:15 UTC

Oh, Regulus is so very, very pretty in this! All blushy and ashamed! Not to mention restrained! And that hairbrush at the beginning! I hope it left a big "B" imprint! And James is just delicious, especially here:

"Finish. Both of you."

Because just, yes. You tell them. ♥

pre_raphaelite1 April 20 2007, 17:08:23 UTC

Hee!! Thanks for the lovely comment. And yes, I'm sure that brush did leave a nice mark on his pale little arse.

*snogs you*

lokifan April 12 2007, 22:09:25 UTC

Oh hell yeah! Dom!James and Blackcest and sub!Sirius and sub!Regulus and dub-con and paddling... *pants* Seriously, I think you hit like 90% of my kinks. Another "guh" here.

pre_raphaelite1 April 20 2007, 17:09:11 UTC

*dances happily at your comment*
Thank you!

And out of simple curiosity which kinks didn't I hit? :P

lokifan April 21 2007, 17:06:52 UTC

Let's see, you got dubcon, d/s, biting, bondage, paddling... *starts panting again* I have a thing for rimming, hairpulling, hand-spanking and lots of kissing during sex (although that last one in particular wouldn't work in this one). You hit lots of them (and hard). Plus the Blackcest, and the dom!James and sub!Sirius... right, I'm going to stop typing and start re-reading. :d

sweeter_melissa April 15 2007, 09:13:06 UTC

I read "A Waltz to Surrender" and my brain instantly sprang to life saying "A Walk to Dismember." First thought was, "Ok... weird." Second thought was, "That might actually work for a Sirius fic." ;D

pre_raphaelite1 April 20 2007, 17:10:23 UTC

...

*gigglesnorts*
You ridiculous thing! *adores*

shaggydogstail April 21 2007, 00:12:49 UTC

I can't think why I didn't read this when you first posted it.

Anyway, it's utterly obscene and you are a terrible pervert. Well done. ♥