Comments | practiqueal: Hot Off the Press

practiqueal

Hot Off the Press

Feb 25, 2008 23:08

Title: Hot Off the Press
Pairing: Sasuke x Sakura
Genre: Romance/Sci-Fi
Summary: [AU] Sakura was Sasuke's biggest rival, and he really couldn't stand her enough to stand a two-minute conversation. For Sakura, the feeling was all too mutual. But now they're going to have to get past their differences to cover the biggest scoop of the year, free a man, ( Read more... )

fandom: naruto, pairing: sasusaku, fic: excerpt

Comments 17

kitsuneasika February 26 2008, 05:12:54 UTC

Short version: I like it ^_^

Long version: Seems like an interesting enough idea, and I like how you pulled in Sakura being bullied. I don't usually see that in AU fics, actually. Or, at least not with that much importance.

practiqueal February 26 2008, 19:55:03 UTC

I love you for saying that, because I know you don't even like SasuSaku. One day, I am really going to write a fic with a pairing you really like.

kitsuneasika February 26 2008, 20:36:09 UTC

I may not like SasuSaku, but I love your writing, so it works out. ♥ And that'd be awesome! ♥

practiqueal February 27 2008, 00:18:14 UTC

Aww.

Okay, what pairings do you like most in Naruto? I'll keep them in mind.

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ironywithwit February 26 2008, 19:49:14 UTC

This has me interested.

Because it seems different, and you made Sakura so canon, something which is spectacularly hard to do when writing AUs. Plus, your last line has me interested on how Sakura knows Sasuke.

I liked it :D

practiqueal February 26 2008, 19:55:55 UTC

I'm glad! I'm getting into it again, too, and I might finish it - or at least incorporate it into another idea I had. =D

ironywithwit February 27 2008, 00:02:52 UTC

That makes me happy :D And I can't wait until you piece them together. Or not. Either one.

littlemissbang February 26 2008, 23:12:52 UTC

Oh wow--that is really good.
SRSLY.
You should make it longer, and post it on ff.net.
(ITS SO EFFING GOOD I TELL YOU.)

practiqueal February 27 2008, 03:11:08 UTC

Wow, thank you, and I will try to work on it for sure.

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practiqueal February 27 2008, 02:50:06 UTC

Thanks, I actually took out a huge chunk where I explained a lot, so I was hoppy someone noticed.

Yes, it was Sasuke.

AHAHA, I don't even know. It's so over-used in fanfic, though.

starsparklez_2 March 1 2008, 22:59:14 UTC

Nilie wholeheartedly approves of this post! XD

Sakura in AU, could most certainly become a journalist if she didn't go into medicine, which I believe, had a lot to do with trying to rescue and perhaps even heal Sasuke in canon.

:) Would love to read more of it it you decide to continue this. It's enough for a prologue if you want to try posting it on ff.net :D