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3479: Lucius's Secret: The Dark's Newest Alley - See Entry

Jun 12, 2015 20:57

Don't forget about Tropes Sue Week either. I'm looking for help finding entries for said week. I'm also looking for some feedback on this.

Here is the last one found during Voldemort's Daughter Week.

TITLE: Lucius's Secret: The Dark's Newest Alley
PERPETRATOR: Nyx Eryn
SUE-O-METER:

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af - wandless magic (child mastery), rating - toxic, ac - legilmency and/or oculumency, related to the malfoys, related to blaise, af - magic resistance, ap - acting pursuit, ac - wandless magic (not children), am - flying magic (non-canon)

Comments 3

rampick June 15 2015, 16:52:40 UTC

Wow. This Sue is very toxic. And it's convenient that "the Potter boy" is now a female, demented werewolf. So this Sue may actually be good. She's saving the world and changing Voldemort's mind about muggles. She's a hero. An evil hero!

rampick June 15 2015, 19:52:15 UTC

I needed to reply to this Sue again.

In my own writing, I work really hard to make sure my characters have a villain worth fearing. I love villains. You can't have a story without them or some sort of real substantial threat to the main characters. I think this character is meant to be a villain but chapter by chapter we're supposed to cheer for her. Chapter by chapter she is revealed to be so awesome that she won't really have to do much to thwart Miss Insane-Potter-Werewolf.

This sickens me.

But not more so than Blaise and Draco speaking in unison about how wonderful Aeron is.

yemi_hikari June 19 2015, 00:38:16 UTC

A villain also needs a weakness of some kind and can't be all powerful. This is a nit pick for a particular published series I've finally got around to viewing. The writer's known for his deux mechania though.