3279: The Outcome - Lyra Lily Malfoy

[pottersues]

I had to deal with some computer issues. I got back and realized that I should be moving from regular Special Pet week to Teacher's Pet week and decided to go and do the two fanfics that have been sent in to my g-mail. Both are anons... and not the same person.
- Three days left until fanfic contest starts

Comments

[beacon80]

I'm pretty sure she was sorted two years ago, and was just writing a letter describing it the day before.

The whole backstory thing really doesn't make sense, especially with as little explanation as we get. I mean, for starters, why would Lucius sleep with a muggle-born? The Suethor probably didn't realize that Lucius is six years older than Lily, for that matter, and likely never met her.

And how does Harry even know who Bellatrix is? For that matter, the Dursleys even letting him have a wizarding pen pal is a bit much to swallow.

[afleur_de_lis]

My main question is why Lily would even go with Lucius in the first place. I mean, her values and beliefs are completely different from that of this character and I don't think that she would of gone with him.

I think that the original character in this story is poorly drawn out. Even if the author wrote a fantastic story with Lily/Lucius, the fact that Lyra is so under-developed docks a lot of points from the story.

However, what I find even more annoying is the fact that the author doesn't bother to do her research with the Potter verse. Cell phones in wizarding families?

I don't get this story and I give up trying.

One thing is for certain. I think that Bellatrix would try to make attempts on Lyra's life. She isn't Narcissa's daughter... and even if she was... well, Tonks is enough of an answer for right now.

[darth_gojira]

Lily/Lucius-the OTHER Draco/Ginny