3244: Kimberly Potter series ~ Kimberly Potter and friends

[pottersues]

Here is day five. It's late as I had some things to do.

Here's sometips for fanfic writers. That's today's random link that I found.

Comments

[beacon80]

I've yet to see any fic justify why Harry would be sent to the Dursleys, but not his twin sister. Most barely even bother to try.
And what's up with the Percy love? Pairing him with someone four years younger than him is a bit squicky to begin with, but even Ron is thinking highly of him.
Don't get me wrong, I like Percy, but he's a prat.

[afleur_de_lis]

Wow. Just... wow. Nothing against this author or anything, but she really does need to think out her plots and characters a lot more than she has been doing. Right at this time, you can tell that these stories were written without a thought or care about the work or the characters. Which is a very bad habit that needs to be broken

[yemi_hikari]

Yes... the original characters are taking over the roles of the canon characters. There is nothing original about them. Well... there is some original stuff like the whole arranged marriage bit, but it conflicts horribly with canon. I also agree with the fact Kim isn't acting her age. I'd never thought about the fact magic requires actual intelligence, but if you look at anything of the fantasy genre you'll find all magic users have some kind of intelligence to be able to use magic and the ones that don't have intelligence... they mess up all the time except for the few times they manage to get lucky. She's not acting dumb either like some of the magic users in some series. She's just... all around childish and lacking social norms. It's painful.

[turtle_yurippe]

I wonder if the author from that link has read the Dangerverse.

[pottersues]

Link of the day or the Suethor?

[turtle_yurippe]

Link of the day.