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0031: Madeline Nicola Snape - Madeline Nicola Snape

May 05, 2003 21:57

'Nother one from the backlog.

TITLE: Madeline Nicola Snape
PERPETRATOR: Angel Lily Lupin

SUE-O-METER: (how bad is it?)

WRITING:

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y - hogwarts years (non-specific), pw - woobie/cry for me, af - wandless magic (child mastery), rating - toxic, related to snape, pa - au - canon mangled, pa - au - alternate backstory mangled, sw-o - bitchiwitch, pt - death of parent(s), p - thirty sue pile up, b - unknown eye color, nts - name is in the title (oc), b - unknown hair color

Comments 10

donna_c_punk May 5 2003, 21:59:39 UTC

Dear Brigit,

F**k you, when I wrote this story I had the plot. Everything on my computer the next day got deleted.

Perhaps God was sending you a message, or sparing us the horrible - now inevitable - pain? And ... she can't remember what her ideas for her plot were? I've lost 20 pages worth of fic on my old computer, but I managed to rebuilt what I had from this little thing called "memory".

As For Snape being out of character, I know he's not nice but this is my story not your.

I'm sure Brigit is thanking her lucky stars for that.

And guess what I don't give a flying f**k, now how Madeline talks.

You don't say. ::is shocked::

I did proof read the story, I have a problem with reading and writing.

::gasps again:: NO! You don't say!

If you don't have anything nice to say in a review that don't.

"If you don't have anything nice to say in a review ... that don't." I think there was plenty of not nice in that review, hon. Then again, you have a problem with reading and writing. You said it, I didn't.

Oh and one more thing ( ... )

God should smite thee for putting such crap into the world... fire_bad May 6 2003, 03:23:57 UTC

God save us all.....

Re: God should smite thee for putting such crap into the world... donna_c_punk May 8 2003, 00:04:03 UTC

The icon. I love it. Truer words have never been spoken. Except for that "ARGH!" that escaped my lips when looking at this detritus fic.

Re: God should smite thee for putting such crap into the world... deliciouspear July 20 2003, 23:50:27 UTC

I am SO putting a character named "Detrius Fic" into my next story.

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Re: Oh, and one more thing... pottersues May 6 2003, 07:35:19 UTC

you're right - I need to add a 'summary' section to these.

krylon_junkie May 6 2003, 18:35:43 UTC

After reading what he/she said I don't know if am going to keep on writing, please tell me what I should do.

Stop. For the love of God, please stop.

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terminal_frost July 25 2003, 08:19:29 UTC

"Save the Snape"...

I'm all for that m'self...

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