0029: Harry Potter and the Daynoc - unknown

May 03, 2003 21:32

Really, really, REALLY... GAH! There are just TOO MANY SUES!

I was going to post a Cho-Sue today, but then I found this little gem. Not five hundred words yet, and it already reeks to high heaven of Sue.

TITLE: Harry Potter and the Daynoc
PERPETRATOR: jandl

SUE-O-METER: (how bad is it?)

WRITING:

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y - hogwarts years (non-specific), rating - toxic, nts - no last name, pf - voldemort is after them, pa - au - unintentional bizarro universe, sw-o - sparklypoos, ph - muggleborn, a - made up ability, c - made up, b - unknown hair color, nts - no first name, rom - none, ntn - harry potter and the (blank) title, a - unknown ability, e - american, b - unknown eye color

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enochiansigils May 3 2003, 22:35:59 UTC
Harry then went back to sleep and had a restful summer.

So... what, he hibernates?

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donna_c_punk May 3 2003, 23:02:13 UTC
No flames please.

Well, gee, just take all the fun out of it, then.

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almostpretty May 4 2003, 00:18:23 UTC
::whispers:: there's an abundance of pottersues over at hpfanfic, but I didn't say that.

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shortiefromhell May 4 2003, 06:17:47 UTC
hey, rosa, this is yourself. just wanting to tell you how short your first chapter is and to find someway of uploading your next chapter. ta, ta, for now
jandl

The only thing worse than a Sue is a Sue that reviews herself to see the review count go up.

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deliciouspear May 4 2003, 15:52:02 UTC
I can so out do this one today with THIS lvoely gem that came in on a list I'm on ( ... )

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pottersues May 4 2003, 16:58:36 UTC
No... I think Miss Daynoc up there still has you beat. That passage actually names the Sue and tells the story from her perspective. The Daynoc one barely mentions her, and yet there she is.

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Re: deliciouspear May 4 2003, 18:50:43 UTC
Yeha, but this girl spelled "Raven" in an "ORIGINAL" way to be COOL.

I think that warrants double superschlock points.

~Squee

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deliciouspear January 1 2006, 16:34:48 UTC
The Daynoc thing does say her name. It's Rosa Crump.Unless I read this wrong and Wormtail was calling Voldemort Rosa or something.

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