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Aug 13, 2012 21:29

Here is the last day.
TITLE: Wands and Winx
PERPETRATOR: Akela Victoire
SUE-O-METER:
(awful)
COVER/BANNER ART: Her avatar, which is a parody avatar. The Trix are on a box of Trix cereal.

FULL NAME: Lily Luna Potter, Rhiannon McCaskey, Felicia, Tamar, Pika, Liliana and Mariah... the other girls who found they had Winx powers.
SPECIES: witch and fairy, witch... and the rest all fairies
HAIR: “Lily's hair was now wavy and up in a ponytail held in place with a silver scrunchie with two side bangs framing her face.” Rhiannon is straight dark blonde hair”. Pyka Akabari has “pitch black hair with red highlights”, Liliana Perez has “wavy black hair going just past her shoulders”, and Tamar Heifetx has “sleek black hair pulled into a chignon and two curls left loose, framing her face”. Felicia has has “braided black hair that hung loose a few inches below her shoulders”. Mariah has “curly ear-length chocolate brown hair with a long side fringe”
EYES: Rhiannon has “dark blue eyes”. Pyka has “dark eyes” and Felixia has “narrow dark brown eyes”, Mariah has “blue-green eyes”
MARKINGS: Since it is her Winx outfit, I'm putting it here rather then under possessions. “She was wearing a bronze, flowing-sleeved mini-dress that showed off her shoulders and her arms down to her wrist. A gold chain-link belt was around her waist, she had dark brown leggings, bronze ballet flats and transparent, crescent-shaped wings.” As for Rhiannon, she is curvy”. Pyka is “a slender Indian girl”, Liliana is “a skinny Latina girl”. On the other hand Felixia a tall girl whose race Lily could not quite place though she picked up vaguely Asian features in her” and she has light brown skin”... she's from Jamacia. Mariah happens to be “a girl Lily's age with a curvy figure, slightly tanned skin
POSSESSIONS: Apparently there is a Potter Manor. Phyka has “red and black checkered glaasses”
CONNECTION TO CANON: Lily goes into a panic attack when her OWLs come in. She passes everything. She later gets into an arguement with James about who will be better at pulling pranks, her or James and Fred. James is simply doing some friendly teasing and suddenly Lily is going bizerk in them. By bizerk, I mean she gained a Winx form. She then freaks out because she has the Winx. Nebula is sent to arrange a meetin with her and her parents. They then get to meet Roxy. Rose is for some strange reasons complaining about graduation gifts. Roxy explains how Winx works in chapter two, but I am not sure it matches up with what I remember. It includes something about how first transformations are triggered by “Usually a strong emotion such as fear, anger or determination will trigger the very first one, but after that, transforming is a simple as breathing for a fairy… “, but in the Winx world you can choose to be a witch or a fairy if you have magical powers, so I don't think this is right. Anyways, Roxy takes them on a tour of the Earth Fairy kingdom.
ORIGIN: So, Lily just took her OWLs and James just took his NEWTs. This means that there is only two to three years difference between them age wise and Albus has only a year or two between each, depending on which month they were born in. As for Rhiannon, she's James's fiance. They had to have just graduated... and apparently he has an immaturity problem. Rose's boyfriend Scorpius has already graduated. Alice Longbottom is Albus' girlfriend. Tamar is from Israel, Liliana is from Perez, Pkyka was originally from India but now America, while Felicia Chen is from Jamaica. Oh and Mariah is from Australia.
SPECIAL ABILITIES: Lily is supposed to be fifteen to sixteen years of age, but she acts like an eleven year old or younger. She's allowed to get away with this too. According to Faragonda, “She was wearing a bronze, flowing-sleeved mini-dress that showed off her shoulders and her arms down to her wrist. A gold chain-link belt was around her waist, she had dark brown leggings, bronze ballet flats and transparent, crescent-shaped wings.” and... “Apparently, she already had magic, but in a different form…" and “Very few of our kind know about their magic and vice versa. I know that the late Albus Dumbledore knew of us since we've met him on several occasions, but never has an Earth Witch manifested Winx before… We will have to tread carefully in this situation. Now, how do we approach her without causing an incident?" Rhiannon is a “trophey wife”, or that is how it feels like she's being presented. Roxy also finds out that she is a fairy of “luck”, or as Roxy words it. “You'e the Fairy of Luck”.

NOTES: The author has the characters yell in all caps. I think the Suethor forgot who all started their first year in the prolog amoung other things.

SAMPLE:

"Aww, can't the little baby sister take some teasing?" He asked in a baby voice, laughing.

"James, you're an adult. Stop behaving like a little child and leave your sister alone!" Ginny chided.

"Oh come on mum! I'm just having fun with my baby sister!" James exclaimed.

"Leave. Me. Alone." Lily breathed, quickly getting more and more annoyed with her oldest brother by the second.

"Okay Lils. I get it. You can't handle me taking the mickey." James shrugged.

"James…" Ginny warned.

"James. I said: Leave. Me. ALONE!" Lily glowed brightly, magic radiating from her, enough to slam James back into a nearby tree.

Everyone present ran for cover and shielded their eyes as the glow got brighter.

When it subsided, they saw that Lily had changed.

Really, really changed… chooses by a small screen on the main console. Other buttons are one, there is a button that can make anything you want and materialize it in seconds, then another brings a small screen from behind the driver's seat, and it will allow you to watch and talk to people over video chat. Another cool button is that it dresses you in whatever you want to wear. For Bloom, this is a good thing because she works as a fashion designer, and she designs all of her clothes.

sue - lily luna potter, rating - awful, pf - new/next generation, p - crossover

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