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May 31, 2012 23:51

TITLE: VOLDEMORTS DAUGHTER DADDY DEAR
PERPETRATOR: Pyro and Darnet co
SUE-O-METER:
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FULL NAME: Maximum Riddle (Guess what other fandom the Suethors have written for?), Lexa
SPECIES: Voldemort's daughter...
HAIR: “my hair had leaves through it “
EYES:
MARKINGS: “my face had dirt splodges all over it” “ me and Draco have the same smirk it looks like we are brother and sister when we smirk.”
POSSESSIONS: “well my clothes were torn, so blood showed.” She also gets three sets of boy's uniform because she refuses to wear a skirt.
CONNECTION TO CANON: Dumbledore rescues her and she is placed in a white room. (I don't think the Suethors understand the implications those words have...) She gets to attend Hogwarts because how else would Dumbledore be able to keep an eye on her. She is placed in forth year despite the fact her magical abilities haven't been found out. She isn't sorted like the other students but is placed directly into Gryfindor. Lavender is rude to her because she's dirty and Hermione comes to her rescue. I can't read the third chapter. I just know it has something to do with her cousin's character Lexa and 'poaitions' which “was a complet and untter disacter” She also gets picked for the tournament despite the fact there is no reason for her to be picked. Breakfast then the dragon all in one chapter, getting dates and going to the Yule Ball. She takes over Hermione's line when Ron says “Max you'r a girl”. She's already got a date though. And said date is... drum roll please... Severus Snape! Actually, I am joking. I am not sure who she is dating other then the fact Lexa is dating Gorge. Wait... I think she got a date with Ron and Harry got a date with Lavendar. That explains why Hermione is her best friend and suddenly mad at her. Good grief that wasn't clear. Anyways, I am going to end this one here simply because that was a LONG fic.
ORIGIN: She is Voldemort and Bellatrix's daughter. For some strange reason Dumbledore was there when Max was born at Malfoy manner on Halloween night. (Yes... manner and not manor). Bellitrix and Sirius are for some strange reason brother and sister. (...but they are in this after all this is fan fiction PEOPLE)
SPECIAL ABILITIES: Apparently Voldemort has read a certain book series. That's how he got his daughters name. She also can swear in Spanish.

NOTES: There are things in this fic like “(LINE BRAKE CAUSE I AM COOL)”. Not cute. I'm also not sure how this is a crossover with Charmed...


SAMPLE:

MAX POV

I ran full pelt down the road guard chasing me, what had I done to deserve this, oh yeah I stole that bag of crisps because I was starving. I rounded the corner and saw a cave, I clambered up the rocks as fast as my body would allow me. And hid in the darkness of the cave completely exhausted. The guard ran passed the cave clearly thinking a girl my size couldn't climb, ha ha dumbass. I took a look around my new found hiding place it was dark, damp an rank but it would do and with that I passed out.

THIRD PERSON POV

A man apprated into the cave and saw the girl cold and barely breathing. Extremely alarmed he picked her up bridal style.

" you are safe young one" the old man said the disapprated out of the cave to Hogwarts school of witchcraft and wizardry.

related to voldemort, rating - toxic, 0 - wank

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