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A big thanks to indigoneutrino for sending in this fic. A bit of forewarning in the fact these Suethors do not like critique. I also took a liking to their other fics, so they'll also be featured here despite the fact I don't like the fics for the reasons the Suethors want me to like their fics. Also, twilightsue is having their third Golden Sparkles Awards.
TITLE: The Original Golden Trio
PERPETRATOR: Pryo and Darnet co
SUE-O-METER:
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FULL NAME: Tomiko “Tommy” Lestrange, Alohamora Ride and Celia Moon, Aquamenti “Aqua” Lestrange. Serpentsorcia “Sorcia” Lestrange, Wingardium “Wingz” Lestrange, Leviosa “Levi” Lestrange, Nox Lextrange, Avis Lestrange
SPECIES: witches
HAIR: Tomiko has “short blond hair”
EYES: Tomiko has “bright blue eyes”
MARKINGS: Everyone thinks Tomiko is a boy. (I don't think so...)
POSSESSIONS: An ipod that the writers know Tomiko shouldn't have.
CONNECTION TO CANON: She starts the same year as the Mauraders and makes friends with every one BUT Peter. It skips to her being in third year. Sorcia and Aqua each have a kid that is the same sex as them. Actually, a lot of people just had babies the previous year. Nothing really happens but it is... just bad. There are thirteen chapters of nothing really happening. How can the Suethors call their OCs the original “Golden Trio” is beyond me. Nothing plays into them being important in the future.
ORIGIN: To quote the summary, “Harry, Ron and Hermione weren't the first golden trio, the origonal trio was Tommy Lestrange, Alohamora Ride and Celia Moon. They each have a part to play in the prophecy of Harry Potter, some more terrible than others, they just don't know it yet”
SPECIAL ABILITIES: The ability to be the original golden trio when there was never such a thing as the golden trio. Seriously... the term is a fanon term, not a canon term. That aside, Tomiko's powers include being “abnormaly strong, she could create and control electricity, she could create energy balls and she could shapeshift into anyone or anything she wanted.”
NOTES: There is a lot of caplock yelling and poor grammar.
SAMPLE:
Tomiko Lestrange was no ordanery girl of elevan, even for wizarding standards. She had weird powers like she was abnormaly strong, she could create and control electricity, she could create energy balls and she could shapeshift into anyone or anything she wanted. Tomiko's parents died when she was young and she lived with her grandparents up until she was ten when they too died, by this time her two oldest syblings (who were twins called Aguamenti and Serpentsorcia) had come of age and were able to look after Tomiko and her syblings. She had sevan syblings including Agua and Sorcia who were eighteen. The other five were the younger set of twins who were ten called Wingardium and Leviosa, Lumos who was thirteen, Nox who was fourteen and Avis who was sixteen.
Agua was the oldest by about five minuets, she was average height with bright blue eyes and long wavy brown hair with a few streaks of red, she was quite bossy and likes to take control, she was in Ravenclaw. Sorcia on the other hand was a very tall boy with short blond hair and dark brown eyes, he was pretty much a big kid but he could be really sly when he wanted to be, he was a Slytherin. Wingz and Levi were identical twins, both of them were average height with long, curly blond hair and big brown, almost black, eyes,they were very brave and liked to pull pranks, they haddent yet started Hogwarts. Avis wasn't the brightest tool in the box, but he was definatly the kindest and most loyal, he had sparkeling blue eyes and dark brown hair, he was in Hufflepuff. Lumos was just above average height with dark brown eyes and ,dew to an unfortunate potion explosion when she was four, just below shoulder length blue hair, she was smart, sly, brave and loyal but by no means kind, she was very strong and secretive so for the first time in Hogwarts history she was placed in Grytherin. Nox was a miget of a boy with dark brown hair that stuck up at all angles and dark, mistchevous brown eyes, he was smart and brave yet evil and sly, eventually the hat gave up and told him that green didn't suit him so he'd just have to make do with Gryffindor.
Tomiko was the only one in her family who was not named after a spell, she had short blond hair and bright blue eyes she was brave and smart and sly and loved to prank people, she was extreemly tall and very strong. She was curently making her way down Kingscross Station with her syblings to get on the train for her first year at Hogwarts School of Witchcrsft and Wizardry.
Oh and one more thing, every one thinks she's a boy.
TITLE: The Original Golden Trio
PERPETRATOR: Pryo and Darnet co
SUE-O-METER:
(toxic)
FULL NAME: Tomiko “Tommy” Lestrange, Alohamora Ride and Celia Moon, Aquamenti “Aqua” Lestrange. Serpentsorcia “Sorcia” Lestrange, Wingardium “Wingz” Lestrange, Leviosa “Levi” Lestrange, Nox Lextrange, Avis Lestrange
SPECIES: witches
HAIR: Tomiko has “short blond hair”
EYES: Tomiko has “bright blue eyes”
MARKINGS: Everyone thinks Tomiko is a boy. (I don't think so...)
POSSESSIONS: An ipod that the writers know Tomiko shouldn't have.
CONNECTION TO CANON: She starts the same year as the Mauraders and makes friends with every one BUT Peter. It skips to her being in third year. Sorcia and Aqua each have a kid that is the same sex as them. Actually, a lot of people just had babies the previous year. Nothing really happens but it is... just bad. There are thirteen chapters of nothing really happening. How can the Suethors call their OCs the original “Golden Trio” is beyond me. Nothing plays into them being important in the future.
ORIGIN: To quote the summary, “Harry, Ron and Hermione weren't the first golden trio, the origonal trio was Tommy Lestrange, Alohamora Ride and Celia Moon. They each have a part to play in the prophecy of Harry Potter, some more terrible than others, they just don't know it yet”
SPECIAL ABILITIES: The ability to be the original golden trio when there was never such a thing as the golden trio. Seriously... the term is a fanon term, not a canon term. That aside, Tomiko's powers include being “abnormaly strong, she could create and control electricity, she could create energy balls and she could shapeshift into anyone or anything she wanted.”
NOTES: There is a lot of caplock yelling and poor grammar.
SAMPLE:
Tomiko Lestrange was no ordanery girl of elevan, even for wizarding standards. She had weird powers like she was abnormaly strong, she could create and control electricity, she could create energy balls and she could shapeshift into anyone or anything she wanted. Tomiko's parents died when she was young and she lived with her grandparents up until she was ten when they too died, by this time her two oldest syblings (who were twins called Aguamenti and Serpentsorcia) had come of age and were able to look after Tomiko and her syblings. She had sevan syblings including Agua and Sorcia who were eighteen. The other five were the younger set of twins who were ten called Wingardium and Leviosa, Lumos who was thirteen, Nox who was fourteen and Avis who was sixteen.
Agua was the oldest by about five minuets, she was average height with bright blue eyes and long wavy brown hair with a few streaks of red, she was quite bossy and likes to take control, she was in Ravenclaw. Sorcia on the other hand was a very tall boy with short blond hair and dark brown eyes, he was pretty much a big kid but he could be really sly when he wanted to be, he was a Slytherin. Wingz and Levi were identical twins, both of them were average height with long, curly blond hair and big brown, almost black, eyes,they were very brave and liked to pull pranks, they haddent yet started Hogwarts. Avis wasn't the brightest tool in the box, but he was definatly the kindest and most loyal, he had sparkeling blue eyes and dark brown hair, he was in Hufflepuff. Lumos was just above average height with dark brown eyes and ,dew to an unfortunate potion explosion when she was four, just below shoulder length blue hair, she was smart, sly, brave and loyal but by no means kind, she was very strong and secretive so for the first time in Hogwarts history she was placed in Grytherin. Nox was a miget of a boy with dark brown hair that stuck up at all angles and dark, mistchevous brown eyes, he was smart and brave yet evil and sly, eventually the hat gave up and told him that green didn't suit him so he'd just have to make do with Gryffindor.
Tomiko was the only one in her family who was not named after a spell, she had short blond hair and bright blue eyes she was brave and smart and sly and loved to prank people, she was extreemly tall and very strong. She was curently making her way down Kingscross Station with her syblings to get on the train for her first year at Hogwarts School of Witchcrsft and Wizardry.
Oh and one more thing, every one thinks she's a boy.