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0023: Remember - Cassandra "Kessy" West

Apr 27, 2003 21:17

Yesterday's Sue was pretty horrible, so I've got a nice mild one for you today.

TITLE: Remember
PERPETRATOR: DevilsAngel18999

SUE-O-METER: (how bad is it?)

WRITING:

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y - hogwarts years (1 - ps/ss), je - student (new to school), rating - bad, e - american, pf - raised among muggles, pc - neighbor, sw-o - bitchiwitch, sw-o - quanonreip, b - unknown eye color, b - unknown hair color, rom - none

Comments 11

iczer6 April 27 2003, 21:23:21 UTC

>>Next day she told Leslie and Brad that she was moving.>>

Instead of telling them she made out of meatloat?

>>"What? NO! I'm locking you in my basement! You can't move!" Leslie yelled.>>

That worked sooo well in the Persona series. Hey maybe an insane pyromanic will set the MSes on fire!

>>"Can I tell Leslie and Brad?"
"Beware if you do. Muggles aren't really accustomed to magic folk.">>

Uh haven't you been living with the muggles for the past TEN YEARS?

My head hurts...

Icz

autumnwhisper April 14 2004, 10:59:01 UTC

**jumps up and down, one hand raised in the air** ME!!! MEEEEE!!!! I want to be the pyshcotic pyromaniac who sets all the MSs alight. Oh, please!!!!! **begs**

airey_kun December 21 2010, 03:29:03 UTC

I WILL JOIN YOU IN YOUR NOBLE QUEST.

shortiefromhell April 27 2003, 21:23:57 UTC

Oh wow... that's pretty bad... there's hardly any descriptions or ANYTHING. It all just happens so fast...

This could go Mary Sue or Not Mary Sue actually, unfortunatly, I'd bet lots of money it'll be the former.

I'm not sure how well it will go. But tell please review and tell me

At least this suggests she's open to suggestions and CC...

anonymous April 28 2003, 05:55:11 UTC

What the...? No flowery description of her hair and her eyes? I don't even know if she has sunshine-golden curls or flowing amber waves? I feel cheated if if I don't know whether her eyes are glittering hazel or a passionate blood red!

Not that I should be complaining. I'm guilty of that too. Just ask Icz...

Maria the Maltese

illandaria May 10 2003, 16:23:55 UTC

So much for accuracy. I've seen phone numbers written out for people in the UK. International calling doesn't work the same way as domestic calling. Oh, and apparently the 783 area code is someplace in Minnesota...Which just *totally* reminds me of England. Or not. :P

tobiasfliesfree December 28 2009, 18:52:11 UTC

As a matter of fact, the country code for the UK is +44, so her phone number should always start with that if you're dialing from overseas.

... anonymous December 29 2003, 11:08:59 UTC

She stared at a photograph the entire plane ride to England? Twelve hours is not over "before you know it," trust me. And wouldn't number 5 Privet Drive be across the street? Maybe it's different in Britain, but I always thought the evens were on one side, the odds on the other.