Well, it's kinda hard to avoid commenting on it when they make it one of the most important parts of the story. Clothing can be a good characterizing device, but only when it doesn't disrupt the flow of the story. One article casually mentioned is so much more effective than these dumb eyeball-gouge-wrothy descriptions of entire outfits that Suethors seem to adore.
What the hell is going on in that middle text block? White gas? Going to the beach? She knows Ron and Hermione but then they're being introduced in the next block? I'm...so confused.
As a matter of fact, what the hell is going on in this whole thing?
Comments 52
Reply
Reply
I wish I could respond in the style of Milton, but unfortunately I am not that clever.
Reply
Reply
Reply
Reply
Reply
LOL gruppie. It makes me think of guppie, which makes me think of Ariel.
Reply
As a matter of fact, what the hell is going on in this whole thing?
Reply
(The comment has been removed)
Reply
Leave a comment