Comments | pottersues: 0009: Staring Across a Crowded Room

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0009: Staring Across a Crowded Room - Jayne Sunbird

Apr 14, 2003 10:42

Sorry for the late Sue this morning... I've been having some internet trouble. This will be a short review, because I'm on a school computer and I don't want to be late for class.

TITLE: Staring Across a Crowded Room
PERPETRATOR: divine*soean

SUE-O-METER: (how bad is it?)

WRITING: ***

SUEAGE: **

WRONGNESS:
*

FULL NAME: Jayne Sunbird
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sw-o - tootsitramp, je - student (new to school), rating - bad, ntm - mystical animal titltes, rom - oc, y - hogwarts years (2 - cos), rom - draco malfoy, pf - raised among muggles, ship - draco/oc, nts - speshul name, sw-o - bitchiwitch, pc - relationship sue, b - unknown eye color, b - unknown hair color, p - first person narrative

Comments 3

girltype April 14 2003, 21:50:31 UTC

Love it!

What would be cool would be, if you can get bad sue fanfic action from other sources instead of fanfiction.net, like those real bad angelfire websites with bad mary sue fanart with a girl with BIG boobies and a mudblood loving Draco. Or something like that.

I've seen type of sites. They make me gag.

Thanks for reading. Keep this up. I got this place bookmarked.

scarlettewitch December 11 2004, 10:29:26 UTC

This one teacher was male and was dressed all in black. He had a suspicious look over his face. There was no time to worry about who he was and how fit he looked.

Am I the only one who thinks this is somewhat.. wrong? As it is Snape, yah?

thelosttimelady December 17 2009, 17:43:13 UTC

Trust me, you're not the only one. -shudder-