0061: Harry Potter and the Lost Potion - Alex Potter
You know, once there are more than two of them, they aren't technically 'twins' anymore... I know three is triplets and four is quadruplets... is there a word for nine hundred?
TITLE: Harry Potter and the Lost Potion
PERPETRATOR: Thunder Jaguar
SUE-O-METER: (how bad is it?)
WRITING:
SUEAGE:
WRONGNESS:
FULL NAME: Alex Potter
SPECIES: Human/Witch
HAIR: "She had long black hair to her but, which at the moment had red highlights in it and was braided."
EYES: "She had gorgeous emerald green eyes."
MARKINGS: none so far
POSESSIONS: Telepathic connection with Harry
ORIGIN: Another Harry twin. *sigh*
CONNECTIONS TO CANON: Twin Sister of Harry #457-B
SPECIAL ABILITIES: Plays Quidditch at her school, which is apparently not Hogwarts. Calls Dumbledore a 'manipulative bastard.'
NOTES: When done right, Evil Dumbledore Fics can be very interesting. But this is not how you do them right.
SAMPLE:
Disclaimer: I do not own Harry Potter. I wish, but it is not so.
“This is talking”
‘Thinking’
Something written
Now I will start my story. Hope that you enjoy and feel free to review this in any way you want. I do want to know what you think of this.
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Alex was running, at night like she usually did to keep in good shape as she played on the Quidditch team at school and she didn’t want to lose the shape as she was the beater and knew that she would be ahead of her team mates seeing as how they were all pure bloods, but they would be able to play on their brooms seeing where she couldn’t seeing as she lived in a muggle neighborhood.
She was about 5’6”. She had long black hair to her but, which at the moment had red highlights in it and was braided. She had gorgeous emerald green eyes. She had a perfect tan that all the girls at school envied. She had a well toned body, because she was a definite tom-boy.
‘I can’t believe that Harry finally wrote me, but seeing as Dumbledore is a manipulative bastard. He had to be careful of what he does.’ Alex thought, as she turned onto her road and heading home.
Alex took a quick shower to get rid of the sweat off of her body, before putting on some pajama pants and a tank top, she than popped some pop corn and chose a movie and watched it, while eating the pop corn.
Alex heard Harry’s voice in her head.
Alex thought to Harry using telepathy.
Harry thought back.
Alex thought.
Harry thought laughing.
Alex thought.
Harry thought.
Alex went to bed grinning that night.
“Alex I can’t believe that you are the captain of our school’s quidditch team. You will be working them all into the ground knowing you, but we will have the best team.” Alex’s best friend, Brenda, squealed into the fire as to them this was like a phone.
“I know. I hope that they haven’t been slacking off.” Alex said, while grinning.
“Brenda. It’s time for lunch. You’ll be able to talk to Alex tomorrow.” Brenda’s mom yelled.
“Bye Alex.” Brenda said, before ending the fire-call.
“That was weird. Hope she isn’t jealous of me again. It’s bad enough during the school year not during the summer to.” Alex moaned, while she went around the house to find something to do and decided to play chess against herself.
She set it up and was concentrating on her first move that she didn’t realize that Harry had arrived and was sitting on the other side until she had moved and was about to move the black side.
“Harry!” Alex squealed while she launched at him and giving him a bear hug.
“So who’s on your team?” Alex asked, while they were sitting on her couch.
“Just read it. Better that way.” Harry said grinning excitedly.
Dear Mr. Harry Potter,
We are proud to say that this year that there is going to be Quidditch and that it is against every magical school. We have named you captain of the team. You will have a regular team and a reserve team. Seeing as other teams might do something to you regular team. We hope that you will all get along. We have chosen your team from all of the games that you have played. You and only you have the magic restriction lifted seeing as you will need to do magic to start being captain. You are the only one that has a list of everybody. They know that you are the captain though.
These are your team mates.
Captain/Seeker: Harry Potter = Gryfindor
Keeper: Steven Bletchley = Slytherin
Chaser 1: Angelina Johnson = Gryfindor
Chaser 2: Alicia Spinnet = Gryfindor
Chaser 3: Katie Bell = Gryfindor
Beater 1: Fred Weasley = Gryfindor
Beater 2: George Weasley = Gryfindor
Reserve Keeper: Mandy Brocklehurst = Ravenclaw
Reserve Chaser 1: Hannah Abbot = Hufflepuff
Reserve Chaser 2: Terry Boot = Ravenclaw
Reserve Chaser 3: Sally-Anne Perks = Hufflepuff
Reserve Beater 1: Jared Derrick = Slytherin
Reserve Beater 2: Jordan Bole = Slytherin
Reserve Seeker: Draco Malfoy = Slytherin
We hope that you make Hogwarts proud.
Sincerely,
Minerva McGonagall
“That’s gonna be interesting.” Alex said excitedly.
“Well first off. I want to be here at least a week before I tell my team to come here so that I can get to know you better and we can both set up a time to do practice and find a place that we can build a small pitch.” Harry said, while grinning.
“Sounds good to me.” Alex said grinning.
“Yea it will be.” Harry said, while yawning loudly.
“Checkmate.” Alex said, while moving her last piece.
“What!!! You cheated.” Harry exclaimed indignantly, trying unsuccessfully to hide a grin.
“I did not cheat!” Alex said smugly.
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Well I hope that you liked this chapter. It was hard for me to decide how to have Alex act so that is why it sounds a little off. Hope to see you review if not I’m not bothered by it.
Thunder Jaguar
TITLE: Harry Potter and the Lost Potion
PERPETRATOR: Thunder Jaguar
SUE-O-METER: (how bad is it?)
WRITING:
SUEAGE:
WRONGNESS:
FULL NAME: Alex Potter
SPECIES: Human/Witch
HAIR: "She had long black hair to her but, which at the moment had red highlights in it and was braided."
EYES: "She had gorgeous emerald green eyes."
MARKINGS: none so far
POSESSIONS: Telepathic connection with Harry
ORIGIN: Another Harry twin. *sigh*
CONNECTIONS TO CANON: Twin Sister of Harry #457-B
SPECIAL ABILITIES: Plays Quidditch at her school, which is apparently not Hogwarts. Calls Dumbledore a 'manipulative bastard.'
NOTES: When done right, Evil Dumbledore Fics can be very interesting. But this is not how you do them right.
SAMPLE:
Disclaimer: I do not own Harry Potter. I wish, but it is not so.
“This is talking”
‘Thinking’
Something written
Now I will start my story. Hope that you enjoy and feel free to review this in any way you want. I do want to know what you think of this.
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Alex was running, at night like she usually did to keep in good shape as she played on the Quidditch team at school and she didn’t want to lose the shape as she was the beater and knew that she would be ahead of her team mates seeing as how they were all pure bloods, but they would be able to play on their brooms seeing where she couldn’t seeing as she lived in a muggle neighborhood.
She was about 5’6”. She had long black hair to her but, which at the moment had red highlights in it and was braided. She had gorgeous emerald green eyes. She had a perfect tan that all the girls at school envied. She had a well toned body, because she was a definite tom-boy.
‘I can’t believe that Harry finally wrote me, but seeing as Dumbledore is a manipulative bastard. He had to be careful of what he does.’ Alex thought, as she turned onto her road and heading home.
Alex took a quick shower to get rid of the sweat off of her body, before putting on some pajama pants and a tank top, she than popped some pop corn and chose a movie and watched it, while eating the pop corn.
Alex heard Harry’s voice in her head.
Alex thought to Harry using telepathy.
Harry thought back.
Alex thought.
Harry thought laughing.
Alex thought.
Harry thought.
Alex went to bed grinning that night.
“Alex I can’t believe that you are the captain of our school’s quidditch team. You will be working them all into the ground knowing you, but we will have the best team.” Alex’s best friend, Brenda, squealed into the fire as to them this was like a phone.
“I know. I hope that they haven’t been slacking off.” Alex said, while grinning.
“Brenda. It’s time for lunch. You’ll be able to talk to Alex tomorrow.” Brenda’s mom yelled.
“Bye Alex.” Brenda said, before ending the fire-call.
“That was weird. Hope she isn’t jealous of me again. It’s bad enough during the school year not during the summer to.” Alex moaned, while she went around the house to find something to do and decided to play chess against herself.
She set it up and was concentrating on her first move that she didn’t realize that Harry had arrived and was sitting on the other side until she had moved and was about to move the black side.
“Harry!” Alex squealed while she launched at him and giving him a bear hug.
“So who’s on your team?” Alex asked, while they were sitting on her couch.
“Just read it. Better that way.” Harry said grinning excitedly.
Dear Mr. Harry Potter,
We are proud to say that this year that there is going to be Quidditch and that it is against every magical school. We have named you captain of the team. You will have a regular team and a reserve team. Seeing as other teams might do something to you regular team. We hope that you will all get along. We have chosen your team from all of the games that you have played. You and only you have the magic restriction lifted seeing as you will need to do magic to start being captain. You are the only one that has a list of everybody. They know that you are the captain though.
These are your team mates.
Captain/Seeker: Harry Potter = Gryfindor
Keeper: Steven Bletchley = Slytherin
Chaser 1: Angelina Johnson = Gryfindor
Chaser 2: Alicia Spinnet = Gryfindor
Chaser 3: Katie Bell = Gryfindor
Beater 1: Fred Weasley = Gryfindor
Beater 2: George Weasley = Gryfindor
Reserve Keeper: Mandy Brocklehurst = Ravenclaw
Reserve Chaser 1: Hannah Abbot = Hufflepuff
Reserve Chaser 2: Terry Boot = Ravenclaw
Reserve Chaser 3: Sally-Anne Perks = Hufflepuff
Reserve Beater 1: Jared Derrick = Slytherin
Reserve Beater 2: Jordan Bole = Slytherin
Reserve Seeker: Draco Malfoy = Slytherin
We hope that you make Hogwarts proud.
Sincerely,
Minerva McGonagall
“That’s gonna be interesting.” Alex said excitedly.
“Well first off. I want to be here at least a week before I tell my team to come here so that I can get to know you better and we can both set up a time to do practice and find a place that we can build a small pitch.” Harry said, while grinning.
“Sounds good to me.” Alex said grinning.
“Yea it will be.” Harry said, while yawning loudly.
“Checkmate.” Alex said, while moving her last piece.
“What!!! You cheated.” Harry exclaimed indignantly, trying unsuccessfully to hide a grin.
“I did not cheat!” Alex said smugly.
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Well I hope that you liked this chapter. It was hard for me to decide how to have Alex act so that is why it sounds a little off. Hope to see you review if not I’m not bothered by it.
Thunder Jaguar