0047: A Future Slytherin - Anna

[pottersues]

Yesterday's was pretty bad, wasn't it? This one hopefully won't hurt as much.

TITLE: A Future Slytherin
PERPETRATOR: Firefly

SUE-O-METER: (how bad is it?)

WRITING:

Comments

[uchidachi]

"I'm sorry. That was tactless," Dumbledore said.

woah, hold the phone... Dumbledore... tactless? these two words should not be in such close proximity *bashes the angsty sue over they head with shiny mallet*

-scheherazade

[ariastar]

The sad thing is, it's pretty well-written, and the canon characterizations aren't much worse than they are in an average-written fic sans the Mary Sue. So, sweetie, your time would be much better spent working on a story without Snape's little niece.

However ... No one is unhappy at Hogwarts! Uh ... we /are/ reading the same books, right? And everyone was pretty damn unhappy during the Chamber of Secrets incident, right?

Oy.

[anonymous]

The cat has a more showy name than the Sue?
O_o

[airey_kun]

GTFO MY NAME SUE