0462: Princess of Darkness - Blaise Lestrange-Zabini

[pottersues]

And today's schedule demands late-Sue. Ain't work great?

TITLE: Princess of the Darkness (a Sue title if I ever heard one)
PERPETRATOR: Blaise A. Snape (this is not good. Not good at all.)

SUE-O-METER:

Comments

[deceptica]

I kind of liked the premise of a Slytherin that's not evil but still a proper Slytherin... you know, ambitious and stuff. But then she had to go and ruin it by turning this Blaise into another wannabe-Gryffindor. And then we have the last paragraph about old Snapey the sarcastic bitch, of course. Ugh.

[palantiriel]

As far as this fic's concerned, Snape and Blaise have something in common - they both look like girls, despite being guys.

[chels_dela_moor]

something I am just going to throw out there, why are they having classes right before they leave? Shouldn't they be taking NEWTS? Oh wait, that makes sense.

[queenofzan]

I've been debating weather to choose one myself
What does the weather have to do with apprenticeship if the profession works inside? Sorry, I just really don't see Snape caring much about the weather much...or, indeed, going outside at all much...makes you wonder why he was outside in Chamber of Secrets...hmm...odd.

[sorenlundi]

cigarette break?

[queenofzan]

That makes sense...you must be smart.

[scruffbunny]

Don't the students say "preffesser' insteads of 'sir' or 'ma'am'? Next you know, she's going to have a large grin on her face and say "fear me, sir."

[queenofzan]

Sophie, it's called "spell check". Figure it out. Also, it's called "Canon check". Learn how to use it. Students at Hogwarts can call their teachers either "Sir/Ma'am" OR "Professor", as Snape told Harry in OotP, and as could have quite safely been inferred from all the four previous books. Before you start idioting, check the facts.

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