Comments | pottersues: 0046: CRY ME A RIVER, BUILD ME A BRIDGE, AND GET OVER IT

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0046: CRY ME A RIVER, BUILD ME A BRIDGE, AND GET OVER IT - Miranda Shelly and Kim Chase

May 20, 2003 21:08

The Surgeon General warns you that after reading about these Sues, you may need to use one of these.

TITLE: CRY ME A RIVER, BUILD ME A BRIDGE, AND GET OVER IT
PERPETRATOR: FallenSk8rAngel

SUE-O-METER: (how bad is it?)

WRITING:

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y - hogwarts years (non-specific), ntt - dark/emo/punkish titles, sw-o - tootsitramp, ntp - place names, rom - oc, rating - awful, rom - draco malfoy, p - sue what plot? swp, ship - draco/oc, sw-o - bitchiwitch, pc - relationship sue, b - unknown eye color, ntp - nature place title, b - unknown hair color, pt - love triangle

Comments 12

invalidcaracter May 20 2003, 19:50:12 UTC

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!

sorry...... I'm done... thats just horrible.

donna_c_punk May 20 2003, 22:03:19 UTC

Tell what I can do to improve it!

Burn it. Oh, fuck, allow Pyro to do it for you.

And deep down her heart was breaking.

And my brain is bleeding. Deeeeeep huuuuuuuurting.

::goes into corner and cries::

armanininja May 20 2003, 23:00:10 UTC

Up and front abusal of slashes. Must aquit! *stamps a big 'DENIED' on this piece of shit*

deliciouspear May 20 2003, 23:01:24 UTC

Didn't even make past the fourth sentance.

I just couldn't take it.

~Squee

ren_sama May 21 2003, 00:22:21 UTC

I applaud the brilliant fusion of LOTR and Monty Python in your wonderful, wonderful icon. >XD

Re: deliciouspear May 21 2003, 00:35:03 UTC

Feel free to take it and use it!

Am making a "hogwarts""hogwarts""hogwarts" one as well.

~Squee

crooked_halo May 20 2003, 23:23:39 UTC

despite the fact that this fic MUST BE KILLED! NOW!!!

"She realized all to well what that meant. Draco like Miranda."

Yes, Draco like Miranda. Caveslayer think Miranda stupid. *g*

And dude... you should NOT have to mention in an author's note that some like is similar to another from the book. Just freaking describe the look!

Umm... I could go on, but I will not, cuz this fic is EVIL.

EVIL. lol.