0046: CRY ME A RIVER, BUILD ME A BRIDGE, AND GET OVER IT - Miranda Shelly and Kim Chase

May 20, 2003 21:08

The Surgeon General warns you that after reading about these Sues, you may need to use one of these.

TITLE: CRY ME A RIVER, BUILD ME A BRIDGE, AND GET OVER IT
PERPETRATOR: FallenSk8rAngel

SUE-O-METER: (how bad is it?)

WRITING:


SUEAGE:


WRONGNESS:


FULL NAME: Miranda and Kim
SPECIES: Human/Witches
HAIR: not described
EYES: not described
MARKINGS: none
POSESSIONS: none

ORIGIN: The depths of hell.
CONNECTIONS TO CANON: unknown
SPECIAL ABILITIES: Pissing me off.

NOTES: I am speechless.

SAMPLE:

Title: CRY ME A RIVER, BUILD ME A BRIDGE, AND GET OVER IT

Description: Ummmmmmm... This is a fanfic about a girl named Miranda Shelly and Kim Chase. Kim Chase really likes Malfoy, Malfoy likes Miranda, and Miranda hates Malfoy. I don't know how this is going to end. I'm just going to let the stoy evolve as I type.

Disclaimer: I don't own anything.....The Harry Potter Universe belongs to the Goddess J. K. Rowling.

A/N: Please review! This is one of my first fanfics. Tell me if you hate it! Tell me if you like it! Tell what I can do to improve it!

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Chapter One: Is it a dream or a nightmare?

//Miranda, I love you," Draco said passionatley.

"Oh, Draco, and I you," Miranda replied looking into his icy blue eyes.

"Miranda, we were made for each other. Do you believe me?"

"Of couse I do my love."

Draco drew her closer bringing them toghether in a slow passionate kiss.//

"AAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!" Miranda screamed, waking up to see Kim standing over her with a big grin on her face.

"So," she drawled, "How did you sleep?"

"What the fuck are you getting at Chase?" Miranda demanded.

"Oh, nothing Miranda. It's just that you were talking in your sleep. Does 'Oh Draco, and I too.' ring a bell?"

"Bitch! I was having a fucked up nightmare. It's all your fault for talking about him untill one in the morning. What the hell do you see in that gay ass anyway?"

Sighing with a faraway look in her eyes Kim just said, "He's the dreamiest guy I know."

"Shut up! Let's go down to the Great hall. I'm starved."

"Whatever Miranda, think what you wanna think."

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Meanwhile, Draco had just woken up from the best damn dream he had ever had. he had had Miranda in his arms, and they were confessing their love to each other. Of couse, not that he liked that kind of stuff, but Miranda was perfect in every way. She was a bitch to everyone, including him. For some reason that just made him more attracted to her. Walking down the stairs to the common room, Draco saw Miranda glance at him with complete hatred in her eyes. (A/N: Similar to the way Snape looks at Harry)

Draco just sighed; she looked even cuter when she was mad. It just drove him crazy.

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Kim chase was walking with Miranda down to the common room when she saw Draco emerge from his room. She say him quickly glance at Miranda, and sigh. There was a sparkle in his eyes that she had never seen. She realized all too well what that meant. Draco like Miranda. Oh, how Kim wished Draco would look at her that way. But no! he had to like Miranda. //It's just as well// thougt kim. //i mean, i don't like him that much. He's snobby and rich. And... and.. oh well, he's a lot of stuff.//

But deep down, Kim knew she really loved him. And deep down her heart was breaking.

y - hogwarts years (non-specific), ntt - dark/emo/punkish titles, sw-o - tootsitramp, ntp - place names, rom - oc, rating - awful, rom - draco malfoy, p - sue what plot? swp, ship - draco/oc, sw-o - bitchiwitch, pc - relationship sue, b - unknown eye color, ntp - nature place title, b - unknown hair color, pt - love triangle

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