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0044: Wolfboy's Home Life - Danielle Adamar

May 19, 2003 08:29

I woke up this morning and realized that I went to bed last night without posting a Sue for you all! We cannot have that, so here is my catch-up Sue:

TITLE: Wolfboy's Home Life
PERPETRATOR: Prof. GrumpyWolf and My Minion

SUE-O-METER: (how bad is it?)

WRITING:

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ship - remus/oc, y - marauder era, nts - no last name, pf - marauder friend, ntr - sounds lovely titles, pf - marauder addition (fifth marauder), rating - awful, nts - speshul name, be - brown eyes, rom - remus lupin, sw-o - tootsitramp, bh - blond/blonde hair, pc - childhood friend, rom - oc, b - chocolate eyes/food descriptions, pw - subject matter not kawaii, pc - relationship sue

Comments 53

lillyv May 19 2003, 08:03:38 UTC

Have you read her profile? She hates Harry Potter, so in her stories he's been replaced by "Ashley Potter."

Now, excuse me for interrupting, but, um...the title of the books all contain "Harry Potter." The series is reffered to as "The Harry Potter Series." Harry Potter is the central focus of all the books...

Don't you suppose, in any fanfic you write, Harry Potter ought to at least EXIST?

Sorry about that. People like this piss me off. "I don't like so and so, so I'm just going to pretend they don't exist!" Then why even bother posting it as fanfiction? At this point, write an original story, for crying out loud!

anglepoiselamp May 19 2003, 09:31:22 UTC

HUH?!?!
That story is so fucked up.
What really gets on my nerves is the endless dialogue where each little comment is followed by a pointless description, in this manner:

...Asked Romulus curiously.

...Said Pam loudly.

...Said Remus pathetically.

...Pouted Sam seriously.

That makes me pout seriously.

Also, is it just me or has Peter been completely erased from existence? He was, after all, quite an essential part of the Marauder clique.

And I have no words to describe how much I detest the phrase "Remmie is in luuuuurve".

anglepoiselamp May 20 2003, 01:42:15 UTC

Makes you think of Tom Swifties, doesn't it?

childofatlantis May 19 2003, 11:40:38 UTC

*stalks and kills evil Lupin-Sue*

He has eyes for no-one but Sirius. I will defend this to my dying day.

Incidentally, that bit about incest and brain chemicals is really interesting. I never knew that. I wish someone would tell it to the Fred/George slashers... *twitch*

kenkazaki2 January 14 2012, 05:10:27 UTC

Wait, people ship Fred and George?
*Mumble* I thought I read weird pairings...o_O

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anonymous December 29 2003, 12:41:00 UTC

Oh, people have done this..."Anger was etched into his face so deeply that he looked angry" is my favorite.

anonymous May 19 2003, 11:42:08 UTC

Gotta love fics in which the author's note is longer than the story itself. And what a spectacular author's note it was. (I think somebody needs to introduce Mrs. Lupin to contraceptives...)

~Wolfserpent

anonymous May 19 2003, 11:48:01 UTC

Yeeah, why I thought this was the entire story and not an excerpt is beyond me...