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[pottersues]

Today is a quick entry due to it being

Title: Louella Alexander
Perpetrator: fallingferns
Sue-O-Meter: Bad
Cover/Banner Art: The cover is the title at the bottom in swooping script font which is difficult to read because behind it is the Hogwarts cassle and behind that is a girl who is supposed to represent out Sue in blue tones with more of the

Comments

[darth_gojira]

This has potential, but the dialogue tags are awkward and the plot is really dull

[yemi_hikari]

One of the things I think writers need to learn is that their character doesn't have to be special. Instead, they need to have real purpose. This writer struggles with this, with way to many OCs.