5003: Ave and the Prisoner DISCONTINUED - Avery Melody Whittaker not Rowling but Black

[pottersues]

Title: Ave and the Prisoner DISCONTINUED
Perpetrator: jlora123
Sue-O-Meter: Toxic
Cover/Banner Art: Their avatar is Spougebob Squarepants
Summary: “Ave Whittaker is normal in all ways except for one: she's a witch. When she starts her first year at Hogwarts, she's in for a major surprise-Sirius Black, notorious prisoner from Azkaban, the wizard

Comments

[anonymous]

An unloved child will have psychological issues. I really, really hate it when people write abuse as a backstory just to make their characters look sympathetic without actually showing the consequences of said abuse. These are subjects that need to be treated with gravitas and respect, yet these suethors almost never bother.

[darth_gojira]

The plot is lazy and the character is obnoxious.