4430: To Make Matters Worse - Harry and Sue (Not her name)

[pottersues]

Since HPFF is back, I decided to get an entry from there today. It is still just as hard to navigate as before.
Title: To Make Matters Worse
Perpetrator: xrebbiex
Sue-O-Meter: Awful
Cover/Banner Art: None
Summary: The summary is in the chapters, not the actual novel. “All I wanted was a distraction from the pain and he became that for one night. He

Comments

[darth_gojira]

I never considered Harry to be a drunken rapist. We never see Harry drunk, but this is incredibly OOC. I don't like Hinny at all and this doesn't make any sense.

[yemi_hikari]

I guess people could use this as an example of how to write a sex scene without going into the MA rating.

However, Harry's OoC.