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4170: Loving Still Remains - Eloise Bae-Wulf

Jan 05, 2018 23:22

Here is another Sue from the FB section.

Title: Loving Still Remains
Perpetrator: thesituation016
Sue-O-Meter: Toxic
Cover/Banner Art: It is a black and white picture of a girl sitting in a chair. I think it is supposed to be the Mary Sue.
Summary: “To pass her Care of Magical creatures class Eloise was assigned a Tutor, fellow Hufflepuff Newt ( Read more... )

rating - toxic, ap - athletic pursuit, pf - fantastic beasts era, bh - blond/blonde hair, be - brown eyes, b - speshul skin

Comments 6

darth_gojira January 6 2018, 22:34:13 UTC

Wulf. Of course her last name is something that asinine.

". If i want my character to be every freaking color of the rainbow with a pet tiger wolf dragon and a boyfriend who is the epitome of hotness that blows all other characters out of the water then i will."
So she only cares about her entertainment. I only write stories I like to read, but that doesn't mean I need to make them so I'm the only one who'd like them. Why make it a public fiction then? Just write the story and read it for yourself. If it's not meant for anyone else, why bother posting it?

christie_green January 7 2018, 18:22:19 UTC

I feel the same way. The stories I put on the internet for the whole world to see are those with plots and actual characters and respect for canon and such. I still write self-insert Sues who frolic with my favourite canon characters, but those are only for me. I can't expect people to applaud my awesomeness if I post something as ridiculous and silly as my Mary Sues on FF.net. That would be stupid of me, and I'm stupid enough as it is. 8D

pottersues January 7 2018, 22:17:32 UTC

Sadly, that's exactly what this Suethor is expecting.

darth_gojira January 26 2018, 01:24:22 UTC

Exactly. I focus far more on canon character fanfiction than on my self-insert fanfiction.

anonymous January 7 2018, 17:15:25 UTC

"{PLEASE REVIEW!!! This is not a suggestion, this is an order!!!!! NOW DO IT!!!!}"

I find it ironic that the Suethor think it's "a generic comment" when people tell them their character is a Sue but say nothing against comments such as "cant wait for more!" ":((" and "This is such an amazing story! I can't wait to find out what will happen next!" In the reviews for the 6 stories I glimpsed through, not a single one of them sounded insightful nor personal. I have no idea what the Suethor thinks a review is or if they understand the definition of 'generic', but they obviously have an inflated ego.

pottersues January 7 2018, 22:18:55 UTC

Good point. The true generic comments are the "can't wait for more" comments. There is nothing generic about critique. And yeah, this writer does have an ego problem.