4153: Secrets - Hermione Granger and the Criminal Mind Cast

[pottersues]

Caught a bug, so missed a few days. I've also crossposted this one on bad_crossovers in hopes that the community can get started back up again. The crosspost can be found here. Pretty much any crossover goes, but anybody can post to the community when they find a crossover. Another community to check out is marysues,

Title: Secrets
Perpetrator: Acromania
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Comments

[anonymous]

I don't understand why the mention of "secrets" is so common in summaries. I don't mean the general usage of the word, but rather the times where the summary itself lacks any real description and "secrets will be revealed" or "has a secret" or some variation between the two is tacked on at somewhere, like this story's summary. Do the writers do it because they think it's an effective hook or do they do it because they're afraid of writing summaries? If I had to choose between a blank summary and a summary that looked like this, I'm picking the blank summary. At the very least, I don't have any preconceptions with a blank summary. With these kind of summaries, I've already assumed several worse case scenarios. I'm not trusting a story that tries to sell an invisible plot device any more than some guy telling me there's free candy in the back of his van (Happy early Halloween, y'all).

[yemi_hikari]

I don't trust the writer when the word "secrets" comes up simply because there really is no secret most of the time. It just ends up being an empty promise.

[yemi_hikari]

Does being pregnant count as being secret when half the cast already knows? There are no secrets here, but I'm rather irritated with the writer of this due to the plagiarism, but also because they messed up characters from not just one fandom I love, but two.