3506: Blakened Sun Moonlight - Morsie Keenda

[pottersues]

Don't forget about the Thirteenth Annual Pottersue Fanfic Contestt. You've got until January 31 to get your entries in. That is six days away.
- The link of the day is Mary Sue. This image is rather funny.
- Flashback SueA is for Angst

Comments

[cal_yn]

I'll figure out something fanfiction related that starts with a B.

B is for Black, which Suethors declare
is "raven" or "onyx" or "ebony" hair

And also for Sirius, man so attacked
By Suewives, and Suekids he somehow begat

And finally darkness, the color of coal
Which stand for the sHadOWz in Sue's angsty soul

Morsiae Keenda

How do you even pronounce that. Morse-ee-uh? Morse-ee-ai? Morse-ee-ay? Morsha? Morshay? Morshai? And nicknamed Morsie, like Morse code? LOL.

Maisa

Mesa like the rock formation? Mai-suh? Mayzuh? "Maize" would actually be a better name. Or Maisie.

Kendra Keenda

Someone please destroy this woman's parents, Kendra and Keenda are far too similar to be a good name. Like naming someone Marnie Marcy.

[yemi_hikari]

I think the Suethor thought the names sounded good in her head, and made them up on the fly.

[yemi_hikari]

At first glance the reason for transferring sounds logical, but there's also the option of homeschooling. I think most parents of young werewolves were forced to go this route, so why should the Sue be an exception?

Remus is an exception because the teachers decided to advocate for fair treatment of werewolves within their school system at Hogwarts, and it wasn't something that was known outside of the teachers, so why would the sister school know?

What's really sad is the Sue already has a boyfriend. Did she dump him, or he her? Or was the boyfriend actually her mothers, but the writer didn't indicate whose he was correctly?

[zoya52]

The whole plot is full of plotholes. And regarding names all I can say is ...Really?

[afleur_de_lis]

I find that I am rather confused with this story. It seems to me that the pace is really fast, and the writer doesn't exactly focus on anything apart from obsessing over Remus Lupin. Was there any point in making Morsie a werewolf, anyway?

It seems to me that she forgets rather quickly that she is a werewolf, almost to the point that it seems like she is getting over the flu.

[darth_gojira]

So it's not just one Sue, but a whole bunch of them