3506: Blakened Sun Moonlight - Morsie Keenda
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- The link of the day is Mary Sue. This image is rather funny.
- Flashback Sue
A is for Angst.
Hopefully by tomorrow I'll figure out something fanfiction related that starts with a B. Boyfriend doesn't exactly work, as the real word typically used with Mary Sue fics is Girlfriend.
TITLE: Blackened Sun Moonlight
PERPETRATOR: Stupid-Frog Monkeu
SUE-O-METER: Awful
COVER/BANNER ART: The writer's avatar is a hand drawn rose, but I'm not sure if they're the one who drew it.
SUMMARY:”Morsie Keenda was happy. Everything was going her way. Until one early morning escapade left her and one of her closest friends scarred for life...the story of how one girl learned to live with the horrible disease that plagues one of my favorite characters of all time, Remus Lupin a Love story, with tons of angst if you're into that.”
FULL NAME: Morsie Keenda
SPECIES: Australian Sue (No, the writer's actually from America. I think Australia's the new fad or something.)
HAIR: See markings... That is really how it is formatted in the story by the way.
EYES: See markings...
MARKINGS: “Her black hair and
blue eyes, her dark skin, there were no common characteristics between Morsiae and Maisa. Maisa had blond hair
and green-brown eyes, more Padfoot's speed, though Maisa seemed of average intellect but Morsiae, she...
she must be a genius, the way you can see her mind moving a thousand miles, away yet here all at once...just like
Prongs says about me.
She was different, a scar on her neck screamed out to me, I've seen it before, raised, red, and non fading and
suddenly I knew what she was, just as I thought that, her eyes flashed to mine. She knew mine as well. We were
the same. "Remus, don't tell." She whispered, no one else heard, that I am sure of. But how long would it be until
my friends knew as well...”
POSSESSIONS: She has a mother named Kendra. She's got a boyfriend named Kyle.
CONNECTION TO CANON: The story is rather painful to read. She gets attacked. The werewolf gets locked up. Her school doesn't want to deal with the fact she's a werewolf. They make her transfer to Hogwarts. (It is their sister school.) She goes with her mother to England. She meets Sirius and Remus. (She also falls in love with Remus. Remus also falls in love with her. I don't care that it did or did not happen in this chapter. It will happen.) Remus gets to show her the library. End of what is up. The plot is already going away.
ORIGIN: It has been a long time since we've had one of these. I think one of the reasons we don't get many is because they're the type of Sue very young, newbie writers start out with, and they're also the ones that are most likely to be deleted by their writers due to the fact they show off how young they really are.
SPECIAL ABILITIES: It switches to Remus' POV just so the writer can describe her.
NOTES: The writer says on their profile, “first time writer, and I needdddddd encouragement. I'll return the favor!” (That's not how the review system is supposed to work, kiddo.)
SAMPLE:
I sat on the cool dew covered ground a smile on my face. It was early morning, my favorite time of the day. I was wearing
summer dress, white, and shimmery. Classic Deredee Acadamy dress code, seeing as we are currently in Australia,
It's hot all the time. "Morsie? Are you out there again?" My best friend Maisa came outside. "Yeah Maize." I bet the
only reason we're friends is because we were roomed together, because our initals. M.K. for Morsiae Keenda and
Maisa Kloren. "Cool, well you know if Miss. Dunger catches you out here again..." She trailed off, knowing I already knew.
"Yeah, Yeah...but really what could happen?" I asked. The next thing we knew we were waking up in the Hospital in Wizard
Sydney.
"Oh, Morsiae! We thought you were gonna die!" My mother, Kendra Keenda exclaimed from my left side, her
Boyfriend Kyle was snoozing on my right. "Oh...what happened?" I asked her cautiously. "You were attacked.
By a...a..." She bursed into tears. "A werewolf!" She yelled. "Oh my... am I? Am I...one of..." I asked scared. She nodded.
I knew the troubles faced by werewolves in the Wizarding community...I would never be accepted. And now, niether
would Maize..."What about Maisa? Is she OK? She didn't...did she?" I asked even more frightened than before. "No.
Well, they're not a hundred percent sure...but...we're praying. Maisa, she can hardly bare the bullying...theres no way
that she could ever stand the predjudice that comes with being..." She stopped talking and began crying again.
- The link of the day is Mary Sue. This image is rather funny.
- Flashback Sue
A is for Angst.
Hopefully by tomorrow I'll figure out something fanfiction related that starts with a B. Boyfriend doesn't exactly work, as the real word typically used with Mary Sue fics is Girlfriend.
TITLE: Blackened Sun Moonlight
PERPETRATOR: Stupid-Frog Monkeu
SUE-O-METER: Awful
COVER/BANNER ART: The writer's avatar is a hand drawn rose, but I'm not sure if they're the one who drew it.
SUMMARY:”Morsie Keenda was happy. Everything was going her way. Until one early morning escapade left her and one of her closest friends scarred for life...the story of how one girl learned to live with the horrible disease that plagues one of my favorite characters of all time, Remus Lupin a Love story, with tons of angst if you're into that.”
FULL NAME: Morsie Keenda
SPECIES: Australian Sue (No, the writer's actually from America. I think Australia's the new fad or something.)
HAIR: See markings... That is really how it is formatted in the story by the way.
EYES: See markings...
MARKINGS: “Her black hair and
blue eyes, her dark skin, there were no common characteristics between Morsiae and Maisa. Maisa had blond hair
and green-brown eyes, more Padfoot's speed, though Maisa seemed of average intellect but Morsiae, she...
she must be a genius, the way you can see her mind moving a thousand miles, away yet here all at once...just like
Prongs says about me.
She was different, a scar on her neck screamed out to me, I've seen it before, raised, red, and non fading and
suddenly I knew what she was, just as I thought that, her eyes flashed to mine. She knew mine as well. We were
the same. "Remus, don't tell." She whispered, no one else heard, that I am sure of. But how long would it be until
my friends knew as well...”
POSSESSIONS: She has a mother named Kendra. She's got a boyfriend named Kyle.
CONNECTION TO CANON: The story is rather painful to read. She gets attacked. The werewolf gets locked up. Her school doesn't want to deal with the fact she's a werewolf. They make her transfer to Hogwarts. (It is their sister school.) She goes with her mother to England. She meets Sirius and Remus. (She also falls in love with Remus. Remus also falls in love with her. I don't care that it did or did not happen in this chapter. It will happen.) Remus gets to show her the library. End of what is up. The plot is already going away.
ORIGIN: It has been a long time since we've had one of these. I think one of the reasons we don't get many is because they're the type of Sue very young, newbie writers start out with, and they're also the ones that are most likely to be deleted by their writers due to the fact they show off how young they really are.
SPECIAL ABILITIES: It switches to Remus' POV just so the writer can describe her.
NOTES: The writer says on their profile, “first time writer, and I needdddddd encouragement. I'll return the favor!” (That's not how the review system is supposed to work, kiddo.)
SAMPLE:
I sat on the cool dew covered ground a smile on my face. It was early morning, my favorite time of the day. I was wearing
summer dress, white, and shimmery. Classic Deredee Acadamy dress code, seeing as we are currently in Australia,
It's hot all the time. "Morsie? Are you out there again?" My best friend Maisa came outside. "Yeah Maize." I bet the
only reason we're friends is because we were roomed together, because our initals. M.K. for Morsiae Keenda and
Maisa Kloren. "Cool, well you know if Miss. Dunger catches you out here again..." She trailed off, knowing I already knew.
"Yeah, Yeah...but really what could happen?" I asked. The next thing we knew we were waking up in the Hospital in Wizard
Sydney.
"Oh, Morsiae! We thought you were gonna die!" My mother, Kendra Keenda exclaimed from my left side, her
Boyfriend Kyle was snoozing on my right. "Oh...what happened?" I asked her cautiously. "You were attacked.
By a...a..." She bursed into tears. "A werewolf!" She yelled. "Oh my... am I? Am I...one of..." I asked scared. She nodded.
I knew the troubles faced by werewolves in the Wizarding community...I would never be accepted. And now, niether
would Maize..."What about Maisa? Is she OK? She didn't...did she?" I asked even more frightened than before. "No.
Well, they're not a hundred percent sure...but...we're praying. Maisa, she can hardly bare the bullying...theres no way
that she could ever stand the predjudice that comes with being..." She stopped talking and began crying again.