Mignonne "Min" Marie Deschamps

[potcsues]

TITLE: To Catch A Thief
CULPRIT: DaydreamBeliever14
SUMMARY: "Mignonne is a professional jewel thief who knows where one of the greatest jewelry treasures in the world is. So when she meets Captain Jack she enlists him to help her find it. But, not without some adventure on the way! Please R&R! Merci!"
BEST LINE: "His luscious mouth was set into a

Comments

[bulldogface]

*facepalm*

Stop trying to be French, Suethor. You're not and boy, does it show. Nobody names their child "cute". It's like having a Japanese kid called Kawaii. Also Jack would not use fanboy French, and having a purple cloak is farking stupid.

That is all.

[salophile]

Merci. I happen to own a purple cloak, though mine isn't velvet 'n pwetty 'n sparkly and I don't wear it in the Caribbean. Mine's fleece, and it's nice and cozy on a winter's day.

[bulldogface]

The point being that you wouldn't wear it outside on a hot day in the tropics and expect everyone to think you look cool. A Sue, on the other hand...

velvet 'n pwetty 'n sparkly

Don't say it, they'll get ideas. Soon every Sue will be walking around in one.

[salophile]

You mean they aren't already?! Maybe I can get the top back on the can of worms, if I hurry!

[daniellafromage]

The Sue's middle name is going to be the closest I'll ever get to my first name. My name is, as of yet, unSueable. Huzzah!

[perrie]

Me too ^_^ It's so good to have an unSueable name, isnt it?

[alienchrist]

i just wanted to say i really dig your icon, Perrie.

[roz_morgan]

soulmates? and reincarnated soulmates? Blagh!

Did you know Sue's are the reason I stopped believing in soulmates -because every damn person thought that becuase Jack or Remus Lupin or Boromir was a hot ass that their lust for that charector = true love.

Never matter that Jack loves the Black Pearl and probably picked up some nasty STD from whores, Remus is a tortured werewolf who already has Sirius (I'm a shipper, shoot me dead I don't care) and Boromir is dead, true love would overcome all those annoying little details.

Oh good, Sue has made me rant.

[ganeris]

Wind blew fervently around the handsome man perched in the crow’s nest. Wind isn't so much what I think of when thinking of 'blowing fervently', but whatever.

it was like a cool sensual breeze on a hot day. What is it with this Suethor and the sexy air currents?

Jack had no idea what was going on until Min’s lips were all over his. Does this give anyone else the mental picture of large, puffy, sentient lips running amok?

Min was going to be a hard cookie to crack, but he was going to crack her. See, I feel better now, knowing Jack is on crack and this is all probably just a horrible drug and rum induced hallucination. Maybe he's been having absinthe instead of rum, that would explain a lot.

Oh, and that soulmates dream? *shudder*

[himitsuwalkyrja]

Ewewewewewewew. . .That whole dream thing just makes me think of that soap opera, Passions. I know right now in that the couple who are soul mates in the series just had a random flashback of their past lives where the guy was like Jack and the girl sort of like Elizabeth and the guy's brother who loves her like Norrington. O.o;;; My sister keeps up with it. . .

I actually don't mind the French in it, it would be better if this was a good fanfic though. . .
I hate that she puts a translation right after it-it's not too hard to figure out and if you want people to understand it then couldn't she just make a translation page?

[bulldogface]

Or she could use English, like we do on an English site.