Josephine "Bonnie Jo" Hall
TITLE: Looking Past the Exterior
CULPRIT: Concetta
SUMMARY: " female pirate runs aground on Port Royal, Commodore Norrington jails her, when checks up on her to find her ill, he is filled with compassion and takes her under his care, owning that once she is well, she goes back to jail, but will he still stand by h"
BEST LINE: "You had two mishaps ( Read more... )
CULPRIT: Concetta
SUMMARY: " female pirate runs aground on Port Royal, Commodore Norrington jails her, when checks up on her to find her ill, he is filled with compassion and takes her under his care, owning that once she is well, she goes back to jail, but will he still stand by h"
BEST LINE: "You had two mishaps ( Read more... )
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I have a small comment to make. Eyes like the Caribbean sea...during a storm? When the Jack and Will went through that storm, weren't the waters kind of, well, black?
And if she meant blue as the Caribbean sea on a clear day, I can now tell you from personal experience that the Caribbean waters have many, many different colors. Depends whether the water is deep or shallow, whether there's coral there or not...basically her eyes could be grey, sapphire blue or turquoise, or all of the above.
In other news, Shay Leigh Sue has been in the betaing for, well, about two weeks now. (It's a really long one, but hey, there are eight Sues.) I scouted out my newest Sue a litte while ago but I'm having issues with PPCing it because the author actually responded (a little) to my concrit. The whole mess is on my LJ, and I'd really appreciate opinions on it.
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