You Say Pumpkin, We Say Pie.

Nov 10, 2010 18:07

Rating: R for language
Genre: Gen
Summary: Written for a prompt on the fabulous hoodietime's autumn-themed comment meme. The prompt was supplied by the equally fabulous wave obscura. 
Disclaimer: Not mine.

You Say Pumpkin, We Say Pie )

gen, fever, pneumonia, sick dean

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darth_firefly November 11 2010, 02:24:08 UTC
This was incredible. Loved it!

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postfallen November 11 2010, 02:33:20 UTC
Thank you for reading! :)

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borgmama1of5 November 11 2010, 02:48:36 UTC
Wow, I really liked this.

Fiona was an interesting character, one who wasn't bowled over by Dean's appeal and also not interested in being maternal, so her ambivelance felt geniune.

And I'm glad John got back in time.

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postfallen November 11 2010, 02:54:14 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.

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dante_s_hell November 11 2010, 03:02:07 UTC
This piece was so wrought with emotion! Your description of a sick Dean was so very well done. And I loved Fiona.

Last line, was killer.

Thanks so much for sharing.

Loved, loved this!

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postfallen November 11 2010, 03:31:13 UTC
I'm happy you enjoyed it...Thanks reading and reviewing! :) I appreciate it.

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taylorariel November 11 2010, 03:26:40 UTC
Very entertaining story. And very touching.
Thank You.

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postfallen November 11 2010, 03:35:21 UTC
Thanks so much! It was a great prompt and so much fun.

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dawnintheforest November 11 2010, 03:29:44 UTC
Aw, I enjoy fics written from a outside perspective like that!

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postfallen November 11 2010, 03:38:52 UTC
I love outside POVs too! Thanks for that - that's a really nice compliment.

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