You Say Pumpkin, We Say Pie.

Nov 10, 2010 18:07

Rating: R for language
Genre: Gen
Summary: Written for a prompt on the fabulous hoodietime's autumn-themed comment meme. The prompt was supplied by the equally fabulous wave obscura. 
Disclaimer: Not mine.

You Say Pumpkin, We Say Pie )

gen, fever, pneumonia, sick dean

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27_jaredjensen November 11 2010, 03:43:17 UTC
Aww, I loved this!! ♥ Oh, Dean. Poor muffin. I really liked Fiona:) And that last line. This was so beautiful and sad and sweet ♥

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postfallen November 11 2010, 06:56:09 UTC
Thank you so much! That's really nice of you to say :)

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hopeintheashes November 11 2010, 05:29:49 UTC
Wow, this was very well-done. Seeing it from Fiona's point of view was really effective, and the sense of desperation and urgency really came through-- you made me believe that Sam and Dean might actually accept help from a stranger. Having John come back when he did seemed right, but I was very much on board with Fiona, feeling... almost disappointed at suddenly being unnecessary and out of the loop. Sam dropping the crossword in with the returns was a very fitting ending. Nice job. :-)

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postfallen November 11 2010, 06:57:58 UTC
I'm glad that worked for you -- thank you for the wonderful comment!

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Edition 1,688 pingback_bot November 11 2010, 06:39:59 UTC
User waterofthemoon referenced to your post from Edition 1,688 saying: [...] by (PG-13) You Say Pumpkin, We Say Pie [...]

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Re: Edition 1,688 postfallen November 11 2010, 07:00:14 UTC
Hey, thanks for that!! :)

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embroiderama November 11 2010, 11:04:09 UTC
I love Fiona's POV here and the way she drawn in to help the boys. And I love John returning to say the day. :)

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postfallen November 11 2010, 15:35:37 UTC
Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed Fiona and John! I didn't want John to come off as a bad father, so I'm happy you liked him :)

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stjra November 11 2010, 11:13:22 UTC
Awesome!

I love outsider POV's and Fiona was excellent.

Sam and Dean were perfect.

Excellent fic all round, well done.

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postfallen November 11 2010, 15:36:43 UTC
Thank you very much for reading and commenting! I'm happy you enjoyed it.

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