The Closer fic: Belated - Sharon/Brenda - NC-17

[anxiousgeek]

Title: Belated
Author: anxiousgeek
Fandom: The Closer
Rating: NC-17
Character/Pairing: Sharon/Brenda
Spoilers: 7.8 on.
Warnings: Sex.
Summary: They've missed Christmas and New Years.
Notes: Late xmas fic. 1444 words.

Comments

[joelthecat]

"she suddenly realised that she wanted to say it first and dipped her head back down to suck hard on Brenda's clit."

That's a beautiful bit of characterization.

My only gripe? At some point your viewpoint character is going to have to let the other one get her off. Brenda can be self-centered about relationships, and she may need to be encouraged to do some of the work, but it just has to happen eventually ;-}

[anxiousgeek]

If that's your only gripe, then I think I'm okay. I'm sure Brenda will reciprocate.

[joelthecat]

Will we have to wait for Valentine's Day, or does the LAPD get a three-day weekend in January ;-}

[anxiousgeek]

We'll see. Lol.

[1000ships]

Naked Sharon in a trench is a big, huge thumbs up. You write good sexytimes. I like the musings on how lust became love - it fits both of them well.

[anxiousgeek]

Thanks. I love that coat. lol.

[ldellis65]

Wow. Happy New Year, indeed.

[anxiousgeek]

Hee.

[ubiquitousmixie]

aaaweeee laksjdfj. this made me feel so many feelings. i love that this took place when they're already an established couple - that's so rare in this fandom - and i just love the sexiness and the emotion. *happy sigh*

amazing story!

[anxiousgeek]

Thanks babe, really glad you liked it.

[tayryn]

i sure wouldn't mind if Sharon showed up at my place that way...

no, not at all!

very nicely done!

[anxiousgeek]

Lol, thanks.