Middle of Nowhere - Chapter 10

Feb 04, 2008 15:59

Title: Middle of Nowhere

Disclaimer: These characters are not mine. They were created by Annie Proulx. I make no money from this and don't want to.

Thanks: To smilesalot. Thank you, Em, for all your help, as always. Particularly at this time.

Feedback: Oh yes please!! I appreciate every word.

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kmdlrd February 4 2008, 18:12:01 UTC
Wonderful chapter. I just love your boys, so sweet and innocent and hot, hot, hot. I love the interaction with the children. Thanks so much for this story. I feel so good after I read it. *hugs* - B

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poppyhoney_67 February 7 2008, 14:01:26 UTC
Thanks B, and glad you liked it. I liked their interactions with the kids too, I think they would be like that, very natural without realising it. Thanks for reading, and I'm glad it helped you feel good. x

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mariez65 February 4 2008, 19:22:46 UTC
I always smile when this story pops up. :) Hmmmm....Ryan seems to be a pain in the ass just like his sister LOL! And poor, sweet Justin. I'm glad Ennis and Jack are there for him.

Our poor boys, too - Jack thinking everything is his fault and Ennis worrying for the entire state - good thing they have each other. And I'm glad they went for that walk, too! :) A joy to read, as always. Thanks.

Marie

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poppyhoney_67 February 7 2008, 14:02:08 UTC
Hi Marie, Thanks for your comment. I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for reading. x

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rosiet February 4 2008, 20:03:05 UTC
Oh I needed that! Thank you for this Christie ( ... )

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poppyhoney_67 February 7 2008, 14:06:32 UTC
Aww Rosie, thanks so so much for your great comment. I am glad that it helped you and that it was there when you needed it. Your comments mean the world to me, so thanks for reading. x

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thelastaerie February 4 2008, 20:09:04 UTC
ha... i am calling them this affectionately, but what a pair of deuces they can be sometimes! Ennis is always worried about being caught, Jack is always thinking he's disappointed some father-figure. And you made their contrast personalities shone through.

I can sense that Jack is pushing but Ennis still got half of his head stuck in the sand... he doesn't want to think what would happen when the summer ends... not unlike in OS! *worries*

haha... Meli and her gaydar! the camp is still an idyllic place for them but they are not invisible to the world, i just hope they can handle it when something happens to threaten it. I don't have a good feeling about Ryan... like he's watching Ennis closely.

thanks for the update, Christie... really enjoyed it :)

Eve

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poppyhoney_67 February 7 2008, 14:08:29 UTC
Hi Eve, thanks for your great comment. You are so right, they are a pair of deuces!! In the sweetest way possible. The prospect of the end of summer camp is weighing on Jack's mind and Ennis's too, just that Ennis doesn't say that out loud. So glad you liked the chapter. x

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annabirmingham February 4 2008, 21:42:52 UTC
Oh this was a great chapter; sweet and so so sexy!!!

I feel that everything is going too well at the moment though, I sense something dark must be lurking just round the corner..... :(

Anna x

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poppyhoney_67 February 7 2008, 14:09:12 UTC
Hi Anna, thanks for your comment. Glad you liked the chapter. Mmmm, regarding something dark around the corner....just keep reading....xx

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