Middle of Nowhere - Chapter 21, Epilogue Part 1

[poppyhoney_67]

Title: Middle of Nowhere
Disclaimer: These characters are not mine. They were created by Annie Proulx. I make no money from this and don't want to.
Rating: NC-17 for the whole story
Dedication: To Keren. Thanks for everything. 
Feedback: Oh yes please!! I appreciate every word.
Authors Note:  This chapter is unbeta'ed so any mistakes are ALL mine.  I

Comments

[mrs_spamlad]

I was so excited to see this- I love these boys!
The writing is wonderful, as well :)
Thank you- can't wait for part 2!
jill

[poppyhoney_67]

Hi Jill, thanks for your comment, so glad you enjoyed it. Your comment about my writing means a lot, thank you. Part 2 will be here soon, I promise :) Love your icon btw...;)

[tizi17]

taht was sweet.. thank you dear!!!! and have a great weekend.. ;-))

[poppyhoney_67]

Hey Fausta, thanks for your comment, glad you enjoyed. I had a great weekend and now i have to get writing - do you happen to know where I can find an extra 24 hours? :/ Hopefully it wont be too long.

[rosiet]

Oh my....what a cliff hanger ending!! I am DROOLING for part two Christie!! I can just envision that moment.... Jack telling Ennis what he has been dreaming of....watching Ennis intently... Ennis taken by surprise.... and I can't WAIT to see what happens next!!

[poppyhoney_67]

Hi Rosie! Thanks for your comment, yeah sorry for the cliffhanger ending, that was abit mean! Part 2 will be with you soon, I promise! Thanks for reading and supporting me :)

[thelastaerie]

Heehe, Christie.. you know I can always rely on your Jack to initiate phone-sex *g*

I love that Jack here isn't afraid to bare his soul and even desperation in front of Ennis. This makes him both brave and vulnerable. I just hope Ennis would break his heart!

“I wasn’t thinking of renting an apartment. I was hoping to move in here, with you.”

Now... that's a perfect Valentine's day love bomb!

What a lovely start to the epilogue! Look forward to the second part.

Have a lovely weekend away and Happy Valentine's Day :)

/Eve

[poppyhoney_67]

hi Eve! he he "a valentine love bomb" I like that! Glad you enjoyed the chapter and the phone sex....I rather enjoyed that myself ;) I'm getting on with part 2, will be done soon I promise. Thanks for reading and commenting :) Hope you had a nice valentines day too.

[mariez65]

These boys are so dear and you do a great job of letting us into their hearts. I loved Jack's Valentine poem :)

Really lovely canon touches - I especially liked the potato peeling -and it's also clear how much they miss each other, and not just sexually. Wow, that's some plan Jack just dropped in Ennis's lap! Obviously, Ennis would love to have Jack with him all the time, but it's not just Ennis's home, is it? I imagine K.E. would have some say - but maybe Jack has anticipated that? I'm very curious about K.E. now. Looking forward to part 2. Thanks!

Marie

[poppyhoney_67]

Hi Marie, thanks for your lovely comment, so happy you liked it and the poem too :) Jack really did drop a plan on Ennis didnt he? All will be revealed in part 2, which will be here soon, I promise. Thanks for reading and commenting.