Comments | poppy_sky: Keep Your Head Down [7]

poppy_sky

Keep Your Head Down [7]

Jan 22, 2012 01:51

Pairings: YunJaeMin
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: boyxboy, mature content.
Summary: Jaejoong wants to be forgiven for leaving HoMin and they know what they want as retribution.
A/N: I deserve to be butchered, I know. Also, the pairing poll is closed now. Enjoy~

( Changmin traced patterns on the dusty surface of Jaejoong’s bedside table. )

title: keep your head down, fanfiction, yunjaemin

Comments 36

dulanis January 22 2012, 12:35:09 UTC

I'm glad they are seeing their error. And also Jae didn't let then stay... Good for you Jae. And Homin should stop fighting and think of a way to get Joogie back. Love the update :)

poppy_sky January 23 2012, 02:22:05 UTC

A hundred cookie points for Jae, no? hehehe.

Everything will get sorted out in the end :)

ellennd January 22 2012, 12:54:35 UTC

I'm so happy you updated!! I LOVE this story! I'm kinda happy that jae told yunho and changmin to leave because now they can see how much jae really meant to them. I'm super excited to see what happens next!

poppy_sky January 23 2012, 02:23:16 UTC

They started seeing it before but they obviously thought patching everything up would be easier.

Sorry for the late update OTL

all_nostalgia January 22 2012, 15:30:46 UTC

D: I cried. The story is getting better and better~

poppy_sky January 23 2012, 02:25:03 UTC

D: don't cry *gives you free-tissues coupon*

I'm glad you're liking it so far ^^

loveboojae January 23 2012, 01:30:28 UTC

yes jaejae..
I love your decisions,,
But..you didn't have to do that if your decisions made you hurt..=(

Min n yunho fought seems real to me..
i imagine like they really fight in their real life..

poppy_sky January 23 2012, 02:26:04 UTC

Jae's heart makes his brain look stupid D:

I think they're the less likely to be violent but when they are well... it gets ugly.

ext_236263 January 23 2012, 08:07:01 UTC

this is heart-breaking but im satisfied.. yun n min should not get forgiven so easily..
as much as i love yunjae,, i want yun to suffer in this..coz altho he care n knows the situation he is being selfish,thinking of only his pain instead of others particularly of jaejoong's..
i like it how min is the smarter (when has he not? haha) n i would love to see min/jae make up n a bit tortured/yun.. forgiveness is beauty but yun n min need yearn it so they will appreciate it.. yunjaeminchunsu forever

poppy_sky January 23 2012, 21:40:05 UTC

If Jae forgave them so easily then the whole story would be pointless and bland, don't you think? They're going to have to earn Jae's forgiveness, that's for sure :)

ext_236263 January 24 2012, 03:17:12 UTC

im so so agree with u!
^_^