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poppy_sky

Keep Your Head Down [5]

Jun 09, 2011 03:13

Pairings: YunJaeMin
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: boyxboy, mature content.
Summary: Jaejoong wants to be forgiven for leaving HoMin and they know what they want as retribution.
A/N: I'm sorry for the long wait. Enjoy!

( “You’re really warm, hyung. I think you are getting sick,” )

title: keep your head down, fanfiction, yunjaemin

Comments 31

kkogi June 9 2011, 08:31:12 UTC

I only hate this chap for the fact that it is short lol or is it just me
anyway I don't really like yoochun to meddle with jae's business
even if it's for his own sake, jae is a grown up. :/
update soon and hope you'll get some inspiration lol

poppy_sky June 9 2011, 16:48:23 UTC

I thought it wasn't that short :O

While I agree with you, most people would defend a friend when he is being bullied/hurt.

I'll try to update fast, thanks for reading ^^

n3uromanc3r June 9 2011, 08:56:18 UTC

I liked the chapter, especially Junsu's part with full of worry for Jae. I liked his efforts to take care of the other and how Jae finally got rid of him made me a little bit sad. But the hug was my favourite part, it was really touching!

And the sudden transformation of Yoochun from easy-going to serious was so interesting. I liked how he stated what he wants and how he didn't leave any place for Yunho to argue.

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Music: Black Lab - Weightless

poppy_sky June 9 2011, 16:53:29 UTC

I'm glad you liked that part because omfg, that took so long to write!!

I can't really picture Yoochun being 100% serious so that's why the change. If I was Yunho I would not be expecting it hehehehe.

nur_denz June 9 2011, 09:11:08 UTC

yay it's too short boo, i need more but thanks for updated... can't wait to se more... ^0^

poppy_sky June 9 2011, 16:54:25 UTC

;A; everyone says it's short and I thought it wasn't!

I'll try to give you guys a longer chapter next time --''

Thanks for reading!

ellennd June 9 2011, 12:49:56 UTC

I loved this chapter! But then again I'm biased because I LOVE this story!!

poppy_sky June 9 2011, 16:55:19 UTC

I'm glad you're loving it so far! ♥♥♥

ellennd July 22 2011, 23:20:05 UTC

SO I just reread this story for like the 12th time. It still breaks my heart everytime. Love this story so much!

poppy_sky July 23 2011, 15:38:49 UTC

I'll try to update it soon :)

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poppy_sky June 9 2011, 16:59:25 UTC

I kind of want to tell you if it's going to be okay or not but wouldn't that ruin the story? Heheh.

Thanks for reading!