Comments | poppy_sky: Keep Your Head Down [4]

poppy_sky

Keep Your Head Down [4]

Apr 26, 2011 23:26

Pairings: YunJaeMin
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: boyxboy, mature content.
Summary: Jaejoong wants to be forgiven for leaving HoMin and they know what they want as retribution.
A/N: I wanted to update another story but it got stubborn, so here you go. Enjoy~

( Jaejoong had never looked so out of it before, not even when he was drunk. )

title: keep your head down, fanfiction, yunjaemin

Comments 27

supershinkime April 27 2011, 04:45:11 UTC

MOUAHAHAHA first. Like a ninja. <3

God, can,t wait to read how all that will tunr out TTPoor Jae...Yout write so well, we can really feel how...hurt and desesperate he is by the whole situation...

Thanks~

poppy_sky April 27 2011, 05:03:13 UTC

yaaay, you got first!

Thanks for the kind words ;; ♥

darkqueen_25 April 27 2011, 04:53:43 UTC

Me!

darkqueen_25 April 27 2011, 04:57:23 UTC

I just read all four of the chapters....wow....I can't even begin to explain it...it' so good and well written...and the smut..*nosebleed* :PPP What's gonna happen next? Ooh~

poppy_sky April 28 2011, 02:45:06 UTC

I'm glad you liked it and thanks for commenting!

About what's going to happen next, well you'll have to wait ;)

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poppy_sky April 28 2011, 02:47:21 UTC

Jae is just exhausted, hurt and confused so he's not thinking straight.

Hopefully I'll have an update soon! ^^

lovelysasusaku April 27 2011, 12:29:17 UTC

When I read something like this, I miss TVXQ5.

poppy_sky April 28 2011, 02:47:54 UTC

I miss them too, but we can't do anything about it :(

Thanks for reading!

ellennd April 27 2011, 12:45:29 UTC

Omg! This chapter was heart breaking and so well written! I feel so bad for Jae. I hope everything works out for the best.

poppy_sky April 28 2011, 02:48:48 UTC

It'll have a happy ending ^^

Thanks for reading!