Comments | poppy_sky: Keep Your Head Down [4]

poppy_sky

Keep Your Head Down [4]

Apr 26, 2011 23:26

Pairings: YunJaeMin
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: boyxboy, mature content.
Summary: Jaejoong wants to be forgiven for leaving HoMin and they know what they want as retribution.
A/N: I wanted to update another story but it got stubborn, so here you go. Enjoy~

( Jaejoong had never looked so out of it before, not even when he was drunk. )

title: keep your head down, fanfiction, yunjaemin

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poppy_sky April 28 2011, 02:50:03 UTC

He's not thinking straight. Besides, he was mad at Yoochun for taking his phone and because he was really tired, he didn't mean it.

Jae will be fine ^^ thanks for reading!

marieluna April 27 2011, 17:04:47 UTC

I could feel my heart break... please tell me I can read more soon... I want to know what Min and Yunho will do now!

poppy_sky April 28 2011, 02:50:55 UTC

I update this story sooner than my other ones, hopefully you won't have to wait too much :)

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poppy_sky April 28 2011, 02:52:25 UTC

There aren't that many chapters left so everything will be resolved soon.

Thank you for reading!

soft_daisy May 4 2011, 15:25:36 UTC

this fic is really... ♥
i feel like jaejoong feels so guilty/to blame about the lawsuit, etc. that even when it's clear that changmin and yunho have forgiven him (maybe they've forgiven him a long while back), he still can't see it. poor bb >.< and yoochun and su are suffering too though i can't tell what they think about yunho and changmin. i like how you write yunho and changmin here--i like that they care, which is honestly something i want to believe. &heart; ahhh, rambling too much. haha, thank you so much for writing this.

poppy_sky May 5 2011, 19:13:29 UTC

Jaejoong has always struck me as someone who needs to feel loved, and what he has with Yunho and Changmin for him is a twisted way of love that he sees as the "scraps" he gets and is okay with. Yoochun and Junsu know that Jaejoong is only going to destroy himself but can't seem to get through to Jaejoong.

Yunho and Changmin DO care, they didn't at the beginning (maybe I should've written more instances in which they didn't care heheh but I don't want to make this fic too long) but they're getting to see Jaejoong hurt more and more so they want to help.

Ramble away, I love comments ♥ and I'm glad you're liking this fic :)

shnnii May 9 2011, 17:56:17 UTC

omg poor jae ;( I like your writing and I''ll ne waiting for the next chapter^^

poppy_sky May 10 2011, 06:37:16 UTC

Thank you ♥

I'm going to be busy this month but I'll try to get a chapter out soon ^^