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Melon

[liveontoday]

Player name: Melon
Characters played: Saya Otonashi :: Blood+ :: liveontoday
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I can't claim to be the most out there player, nor the most active at times. However I love hearing comments, I love answering little questions and talking about the psychology of my characters - well, only Saya at present. Though heck, if you know any of my other muses, let's do this?

Re: Melon

[lullabyes22]

'Ello again! ^_^ Enjoying your bittersweet portrayal of Saya as always! Have to wonder what's going through her head now that Haji's back. Is three a crowd, or just more entertainment?

[liveontoday]

Oh hey, it's great to hear from you again! :3

Whew, let me tell you, Saya is torn right now, given that Haji comes from before the Opera house incident and Saya is directly after it. She remembers Haji's confession, she remembers his wish for her to live. Heck, when she first showed up in Poly way back, that's what she kept repeating to herself. "Live on today for tomorrow." She lived because Haji wanted her to

[lullabyes22]

Lol- I've personally always been curious as to how Saya would interact with both Haji and Solomon in a non-combative environment ("Guh! Too much pretty in one room! CAN'T DECIDE!" o.o).

You're right, though; given how repressive Saya was toward any romantic or sexual aspects of herself, Solomon does represent unlooked-for sides of both Life and Self. (In the series, her behavior around Solomon was markedly more, well, feminine. While I sorta found that wishywashy passivity a little disconcerting, I think Saya herself was disconcerted, because Solomon was appealing to parts of her nature that she pretended didn't exist- i.e. a chance to be selfish and live her dream, to be seen as someone desirable rather than murderous, to not shoulder so much responsibility. Whereas Haji, poor neutered bff that he was (or so Ms. Repressed obviously told herself XP), represented more somber and self-effacing aspects of her personality

[ravenrants]

SAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!

Ahem.

I love your Saya, and I make no apologies for dropping a very confused Haji on her doorstep. I think her hesitation and confusion with having him back is evident and a great balance. (Because God only knows, he's confused as hell and it's sending his repression into overdrive.) I think the inevitable...revelation will be a shock and almost a trauma for the both of them and I look forward to it with an evil glee.