How's My Driving?!

Aug 29, 2011 01:10

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Saffy chosenfake August 29 2011, 05:21:33 UTC
Player name: Saffy
Characters played:

Luke fon Fabre ♪ Tales of the Abyss ♪ chosenfake

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Anonymous allowed/encouraged? Y/N: Y!
Other comments? I've noticed a few minor things about Luke's speech patterns and preferences that I've tried to correct over the past few months, but I'm really more concerned about the big things. He's been all over recently, from the upcoming plot to being scarred for life to hitting on people and being embarrassed about it. Leave me your thoughts. I am also taking advice on the way I've set up the plot so far, though I doubt there will be anything conclusive until it's over.

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leviathanclaw August 29 2011, 06:35:05 UTC
Admittedly I've only gotten through over half of the series as an anime, and I haven't ever played the game, but from one I've seen you've got the spirit of Luke down pact. From the serious to the silly. For example, this post cracked me up when I saw it, and still does tot his day. How he is handling grab bag this time round also shows your skill with the character.

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chosenfake August 29 2011, 07:09:42 UTC
klad;safad I feel bad for dropping threads in that post. I'm more of a threader than a poster, even with Luke ;_; sobbb. But thank you! Luke is fun because he kinda goes everywhere with his moods. He is... so very tsun even with the haircut, but he's also terribly sweet. I think the anime made everyone super serious from all the plot condensation and super pale so that might be hard to get unless you do play the game.

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renegare August 29 2011, 10:45:39 UTC
I think your voice for Luke always shines through your tags quite well - I don't know the canon directly, so I can't say how good/bad that voice is, but I think it's important to have that voice stability + amazing that you do.

One thing I'd mention = activity. I know you've been struggling with RL and balancing multiple games, and it'll probably help a ton when all that settles -- but it would be nice to see Luke around and about bit more, particularly outside of his cast.

The plot seems well handled to me so far? ;o;

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chosenfake August 29 2011, 12:43:15 UTC
Thank you. ;; ♥ Consistency is pretty important ( ... )

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stupidgenes August 29 2011, 11:20:00 UTC
I'd like to thank you for consistently maintaining CR with me and keeping me in the loop with some kind of heads-up re: what Luke's up to. I really enjoy Luke and Asch's interactions, and feel like you really spoil me with more than I deserve given my activity and stuff. I know your activity is probably just as spotty as mine; if you're considered kind of distanced from the game, I'm probably ten times as removed. So... thanks. ^__^

re: Big things - I haven't really noticed anything? I hope I'm not just that out of tune with the game, or more specifically with Luke. But being so close, and yet so far away, I'd let you know if I noticed anything of major concern.

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chosenfake August 29 2011, 12:47:46 UTC
//// HAIRRUFFLE OMG

You don't need to thank me for something like that, derpface. ♥

Trying to find the attention span to plop down and sink Akzeriuth plug away at my canon review is hard, so that's part of why I'm all keysmashy. I haven't actually played through the game on a consistent basis since last August, though I watch the anime here and there. THIS GAME IS SO LONG OH MY GOD. I'll play for five hours and realize I've only done ONE DUNGEON. /tears out hair I COULD BE SLEEEEEPING INSTEAD... /stupid JRPGs and my lack of attention span

This comment is brought to you by two hours of sleep.

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