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Luke fon Fabre ♪ Tales of the Abyss ♪ chosenfake
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Other comments? I've noticed a few minor things about Luke's speech patterns and preferences that I've tried to correct over the past few months, but I'm really more concerned about the big things. He's been all over recently, from the upcoming plot to being scarred for life to hitting on people and being embarrassed about it. Leave me your thoughts. I am also taking advice on the way I've set up the plot so far, though I doubt there will be anything conclusive until it's over.
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One thing I'd mention = activity. I know you've been struggling with RL and balancing multiple games, and it'll probably help a ton when all that settles -- but it would be nice to see Luke around and about bit more, particularly outside of his cast.
The plot seems well handled to me so far? ;o;
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re: Big things - I haven't really noticed anything? I hope I'm not just that out of tune with the game, or more specifically with Luke. But being so close, and yet so far away, I'd let you know if I noticed anything of major concern.
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You don't need to thank me for something like that, derpface. ♥
Trying to find the attention span to plop down and sink Akzeriuth plug away at my canon review is hard, so that's part of why I'm all keysmashy. I haven't actually played through the game on a consistent basis since last August, though I watch the anime here and there. THIS GAME IS SO LONG OH MY GOD. I'll play for five hours and realize I've only done ONE DUNGEON. /tears out hair I COULD BE SLEEEEEPING INSTEAD... /stupid JRPGs and my lack of attention span
This comment is brought to you by two hours of sleep.
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