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polgarawolf

Star Wars work in progress You Became to Me

Jan 08, 2007 02:30

Sixty-fifth part of a WIP
Title: You Became to Me (as suggested by avari_maethor)
*Pairing: Mainly Anakin/Obi-Wan with some mention of Padmé
Rating: NC-17
Please see previous headers for other pertinent information!
*Author’s Note: 1) When you get to where this request will make sense, please don't protest about what happens if all you want to do is complain ( Read more... )

you will not stop me., trust your feelings!, i love you!, . . . dying a little bit each day . . ., fear of loss is a path to the dark side., . . . living a lie . . ., let go of everything you fear to lose, . . . not this crude matter., your thoughts betray you . . ., . . . i've got a bad feeling about this!, you can't stop the change., you want this . . . don't you?, the force will be with you . . . always., there's been a disturbance in the force, . . . i love you . . . i know., i'll never stop loving you., we are encouraged to love, be mindful of your thoughts . . ., . . . luminous beings are we . . ., anger fear aggression...the dark side..., kenobi & skywalker - anakin & obi-wan, the force is . . . an energy field . . ., . . . i sense something . . ., don't be afraid.

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spartan_117 January 10 2007, 04:06:08 UTC

oooooh boy *fans face* Gawd it's prolly a good thing you didn't make the movie. I'm not sure I would have survived any of the love scenes if you'd done them *fans face harder*

polgarawolf January 10 2007, 07:12:29 UTC

I'll take that as a compliment! *Beams proudly*

The next bit might get a bit, erhm, weird, though. I had a plot-bunny with very sharp teeth bite me and I'm still not sure I shouldn't have just hunted up a fanwriter's version of a rabies shot instead of giving it to it . . .

spartan_117 January 10 2007, 11:33:32 UTC

Please do, love it was certainly intended as one.

*laughs* Nooo for the love of these two do not get that shot. Weired or no I utterly love this fic and if I didn't think it'd go through a ton of ink I'd print it out and carry it everywhere.

Dammit I love it when those two do nothing but kiss. *sighs dreamily*

polgarawolf January 12 2007, 23:41:03 UTC

*Beams contentedly, in that case. and basks in compliment*

I'd be afraid to do it. It might interfere with the plot bunnies I'd be happier to receive!
*Lol!* Over 1,000 pages in the WordPerfect file. I'd hate to think of how many cartridges of ink that'd use.

You're not the only one. Trust me. Kisses are such wonderful things to begin with, and theirs are just extra special because it's them doing the kissing.

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loke_21 February 3 2007, 11:02:57 UTC

That was great! I have been so out of the loop I have to post to all the other post that I have read so far.

lol..

I think you intimate scenes are totally HOT!!

But when am I going to read Anakin being seme? :P...I just have a thing for equal in this relationship. I think Anakin should complete the cycle if you know what I mean. lol

I don't mean to complain, it was good and all, but Anakin I think would be a great top player. :)

Unless you already posted that I was just a ditz that I complete missed it.

polgarawolf February 4 2007, 06:55:43 UTC

Thank you! That's reassuring, as I never know if those scenes will come out sounding right to other people or not . . .

You haven't missed a scene like that, no. And I'm sorry to have to disappoint you, but Anakin won't be on top until the sequel and he'll need some persuasion, the first time or so. He's just still too afraid of hurting Obi-Wan somehow. And actually this WiP is getting fairly close to its end, surprisingly enough. Don't worry though - there are sequels already planned and I promise Obi-Wan and Anakin are going to be very equal partners, meaning that neither one is going to be dominating and they are going to end up doing quite a bit of turn taking.